While I was searching for food out in the Capital Wasteland, I found this old school... I could not quite make out what the sign said, but it looked like Springvale. There were alot of dead raiders. That didn't come as a surprise, but what did was this thing I found. I heard someone call it a "Flamer". My dad always told me if I ever touched the trigger of a gun, all hell would break loose. Boy, was he right. I went to this town nearby the school. This robot thing called it Megaton. More like "MegaNONE" now. I think you get the idea. *End of tape*

MegaNONE? Yay for terrible puns!

Seriously though, it's way too short. Since it's supposed to be a recording, I suppose that's understandable though.

nice idea but it need's more length.6 out of 10.

Good, but shoulda' been a liiiiittle longer, even for an intro, but this is good. Nice punctuation, and that crappy joke at the end made me lol I give it a 73/100 for the length