» Wed May 18, 2011 9:22 pm as i said this is my first one so if it svck terribley please don't jump down my throat about it. and please tell me what i need improving for the future,anyways here is the main character's bio so you know who you are reading about.
Erralla's bio
Name:Erralla horenheart
Gender:Female
Race:Breton
Age:19
personality:she is friendly to bretons imperials altmer(But they can get annoying)
argonians and redgaurds,
always tries to find a way,frightened rather easily,
very caring towards friends and family.Likes doing things her way, a little quick to judge.
appearance:she stands at 5'4 her brown hair is at shoulder length but
is kept in a ponytail, she is quite skinny for someone her size only weighing 112 LBS
clothes/armor:wears an odd looking stone amulet with glowing red deadric runes on it
and a set of red and green wool robes
Weapons:carry's a silver dagger uses magic and a strange amulet
Birth sign:the lord
Current location:on the bridge of the imperial city
birth place:Skingrad,cyrodiil
Misc:She gets quite uncomfortable around nord men,
the runes on her amulet say"Jebb will protect the one who has the power to control"
History:skingrad is were she was born and raised,
at the mages guild is were she spent most of her days
learning to cast magic and learning new schools mixing new potion's and makes her own rules,(okay that's stupid)
Okay time for the real history:Erralla was born to a wealthy family in skingrad,cyrodiil
and when she was 7 she showed to have magical ability's,then her parent's started taking to the local mages guild hall
where she would be studying the magic schools of destruction alteration restoration and Conjuration for the years to come,
but one day her father had fallen ill and she went to the alchemy shop to get a potion
and on her way back to her house she saw a caravan moving through town, and the last cart hit a bump in the road
causing a small box to fall out of the cart and on to the road but the cart driver didn't seem to notice,
so then she waited until nobody else was around then she opened the box only to find a round piece of grey stone with a chain attached to it,
kinda disappointed she picked it up and as she held it in her hand it started to glow red spelling out some deadric runes on it,
startled by this she dropped it and the glowing faded away,
she was going to leave it behind but it was like something was asking her to keep it and learn more about it,and so she did.
and so for the next three years at the guild doing her usual studying and a side of deadric runes to learn more about the amulet
she learned the runes on her amulet say"Jebb will protect the one who has the power to control" not understanding it she took it to
the enchanter at the guild, but had never seen anything like it before,he suggested going to the arcane university expert's or
to morrowind's telvanni master enchanter's.
so she decided to go to the imeprial city to see if the arcane university can help.
AND SO ARE STORY BEGINS
it was a cool sundas morning as Erralla crossed the bridge to the imperial city, as she got closer the white city wall's got bigger the white gold tower even more so
as the gates opened to the talos plaza district she was impressed with the quality of that of witch could beat skingrad any day,then she shakes her
head to stay focused on the task at hand, while looking around she see's a guard and goes to ask for directions
Erralla"excuse me sir?"
Guard"yes ma'am?"
E"i'm trying to find the arcane university."
G"ah, Ok well you are obviously it the talos plazza so go down the road to my right and through the archway to the arboretum and hang a right go through the gate cross the bridge and you should be there"
E"Okay, thank you sir!"
G"have a nice day."
Erralla followed the guards instructions and got to the university and proceded to the lobby,
there she saw an argonian black and red scales and green scales under his eyes who didn't seem like he could help sitting on a bench reading a book then he looked up and said'
armaz:yes? can i help you?"
Erralla:i don't think you can"
armaz:Hmph,then who do you need to help you then?"
Erralla" well i need an artifact or enchantment expert"
armaz"well that will be me then armaz-tul, echanter"
E"Oh, sorry if i was quick to judge. i'm Erralla horenheart."
A" that's ok. ive heard of you the student from skingrad i heard you have some sort of magical stone."
E"how did you know?"
A "llels from the guild sent a messege telling me."
E"Hmmm oh llels, anyway yeah i do have that *takes stone out of pocket* here look *it glows red in her hand*"
A"*looking surprised* were did you get it?"
E" i got it on my way home two years ago when a caravan passed through town and the last cart hit a bump and a small box containing this fell off the cart"
A"interesting, may i see it? *Erralla hands it over and the glowing fades away*hmm.."
E"it only glows when i'm holding it"
A"i see. i can sence a powerful force in it wanting to get out"
E"any idea what it is?"
A"its not of deadric origin, i think its a spirit"
E"a spirit?"
A"yes a very powerful one too, just itching to get out of the stone"
E" how can it be released?"
A"i don't know something like this is beyond my training*Gives the stone back* "
E"What about an artifact expert?"
A"They don't study things like that here."
E"do the telvanni study it?"
A"im sure the tevanni master wizards know that sort of thing.but you're of the mages guild and last time i checked they don't like us."
E"im sure they will find this interesting,i can feel it in my gut.thank you for you,re time Armaz."
A"you're very welcome.nice meeting you."
as Erralla left she thought about how she was going to get to morrowind speak with a tevanni wizard and about the stone spirit.
so she spent the night in the city and caught a boat to morrowind.
END OF CHAPTER 1
Also, if the fanfic was meant to be written like that, then I AM AN IDIOT, so forgive me for my ignorance of so. Other than that, continue on with the story, I hope to see more in future! 
