Random feedback on writing on this forum got me to now!

Post » Thu May 19, 2011 8:50 pm

I must say that if you want critique on your work that is relevant but meaningless this is the place to go. The feedback is so cutting that a no wonder the great writers will stay away. They are worried the word processor will catch their mispelled words tha't weren't edited. Get the joke? Seriously, thanks to all those that gave input. My first book would of never happened without this place!

Here's a short music vid for being average and loving it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6m0merNMnog

Here's a cryptic entry from a part in Tequila Diaries, if anyone cares.

You are probably confused and scared. I would be to. I left some painkillers in the medicine bottle along with some milk and a sandwich. If I were you, I would take some of the pills and eat the food. I should be back in a few hours. Jennifer, I implore you not to leave or do anything stupid. A world of [censored] just landed in your lap and I am here to help you sort through the events of the last two days.

Yours truly,

James
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