Grims of retribution- the wasteland terror, most of them are exenclave
solders that they are believe that the apocalypse that made by the war is their
god punishment because of the humans moral sins even after the punishment the
world stay unpure the apocalypse survivor are consider as siners and unpure
excpet the ones whose join thier religion and past their hard ceremonys (like
murder one of your closest companion in order to show that you are trustworthy
to this faction god and believe's) also can call theyself the delivers of
retribution. By this religion the salvation will bring by destruction of the
sin world and rebuild it by thier belives the belivers must pure the unclean
with fire of hell (lead and flamers based weapons(old world weapons) and thier
god's blood (plasma based weapons and plasma powered power armors).
faction organization- this faction have 100 of grims warriors per chapter in a
chapter there a 3 companys. in the head of the grims of retribution stand the
chapter master lord isador (he give order to all the 3 companys in his
chapther) after him comes the chapter master librarian (reasponsible for the
chapter researchs and keeper of the chapter main database that contains GOR
history and rules, deadily wargear schmatices and it also the largest pre war
weapon researchs logs and knowledge database in the wasteland.) after this role
comes the companys force commandors and librarians they act by the orders of
the chapter master and the master librarian and then comes the grim warriors
(GOR main soldiers in a grim warriors unit that contain 7 warriors it cntain
one sergent that will always carry the chapter flag) and tech prist (the have
the same role as BOS scribs but the diffrent between them that tech prist are
count as awarriors and send to the battlefield in order to main!

tain heavy supports like armored vehicles and to gather information. the finst
tech prist are work in the faction laboratory in order to develop the faction
wargear to thier "holiy purpose".
GOR wargear- the GOR wargear it a combination of old tech (flamer and old
fashioned guns) and new tech (plasma and nuke based weapons).
GOR power armors are unique because they aren't pre-war like the other faction
they are only build and pure by the GOR tech prist (because the GOF religion is
forbidding the belivers to use siners items because those items considers
unpure).
the GOR power armor design serve it cause (to scare the enemys and break they
will to fight) by the armor's demonic looks. the armor itself contain a variety
of assembled weapons and mods (for example an hidden chainsword that draw from
the armor's arm plates or a robotic arms that automathic reload the warrior's
weapones) because the armor's add ons it demanding power to activite it so the
tech prists build a mobile plasma generator in the back of it to powered the
suits (that i also drew a concpet arts for those armors and weapons)
http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/195/d/e/inferno_power_armor_by_carbon1968-d3r7u3x.jpg

A lot of spelling Errors and Grammar mistakes - couldn't read it :/

Dude... Grammar, Punctuation, and paragraphs are important... I'm no critic, but maybe someone like Yttrium can get you going. Just keep at the story, its how you get better.