Hey everybody, just thought I'd share a short film that a few buddies and I are working on centered around a Mojave Express courier and NCR unit. Right now I can only post the teaser but more will come soon.

Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6n6GZLCbk-0


Some relative info

• Filmed in Ellensburg, WA (Closest we could get to California/Nevada)
  
• Filmed on a Canon T2i with Stock Lens (18-55mm)
  
• Edited in Vegas Pro 10.0
  
• GFX done in After Effects CS5

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Thanks!

It isn't that long and is just some guy walking around with a briefcase and the only thing Fallout related was that is NCR's symbol on it. Also I don't like the radio you used. Would help if you find an older radio from the 1950s or so.

Looks Nice, Of course we can't judge it by only seeing the Teaser

Looks kind of anti-climactic. It's just a guy walking in a desert-type area with an NCR briefcase. Like Styles mentioned, the only reference to FO would be the NCR logo. Without the NCR logo, or the fact that it was posted on a Fallout website, no one would know what the video was.

You need to add a deciding factor to the game, right now everything here is circumstantial. If I were to randomly stumble upon this video on YouTube, I probably wouldn't know what this was at all if I hadn't played FNV. You need to add your own 'brand' to it, for example. Something that blatantly shows that it's Fallout related, or that it's going to be a film. Seriously, if it weren't for the title of the video and the fact that it was posted on an FO website, I probably wouldn't pay it any mind.