After dealing with Tenpenny Tower, Olly moved on to a smaller town.... Her journal read this:
July 27th: Mister President? Who does he think he is talking to? If you ask me, it should be Madam Olly! As soon as I get the key to this lunatic's house, he will be answering to me, and if he refuses to answer to me, he can answer to some bullets out of my assault rifle.
July 27th, 9:00pm: Well, that did not work out as well as planned. The town was pretty dry, and I did not get to free too many souls, mostly because the children ran away.
July 28th, 12:30am: The place was dry as I said... But I found another place... Whoa... What t- | END. The last few words of the journal were scribbled out.

Again, way too short. Oh, and you shouldn't make more than one topic for a story.

please don't make extra topics after making a single post in the last one.

Yea new threads like that get confusing. WAY TO SHORT

Hated it. You shouldn't use more than one topic for the same story, anyway. Plus, why would she write "What the-?" did the attackers give her ten tedious seconds to write it down? Also it was way too short.