You're doing several things wrong.
Firstly, you're in the wrong forum, The Construction Set forum is http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/forum/24-construction-set-oblivion/.
Secondly, you have ESPs loaded into the CS as well as the one you have active for editing. A bug in the CS will guarantee a crash on save whenever you have other ESPs loaded in the CS, and the only way to avoid this crash is to make any edits in the Tamriel worldspace (doesn't matter what) - your active ESP must contain the Tamriel worldspace record or the CS cannot save.
Thirdly, you're trying to use one ESP to edit content from other ESPs. This is impossible the way you are doing this. You need to either install the Construction Set Extender by ShadeMe, or ESMify all the ESPs you loaded before your active ESP (and then ESPify them again before using them in-game). Wrye Bash is the best tool to ESMify ESPs, though TES4Edit can do it to. It would be much easier to just use the CSE instead however as it doesn't require ESMification.
If you're trying to create one ESP with content from various other ESPs but without needing those other ESPs, then you'll also need to use TES4Edit to ensure that all content required is copied across, then use the Clean Masters command to remove dependency from the other ESPs.