Blood stained his imperial armour as he knelt down against a rock, he was panting heavily, a chipped axe in one hand and his helmet in the other. He inspected the axe and reluctantly threw it away, a crack running along the steel blade. Looking around him, he saw others crouching behind boulders, their dark imperial armour making them obvious in the snow covered landscape. A man reached out for him, he wore standard imperial armour and was shouting orders but he couldn't hear him, he rubbed his elven ears to try and clear them up but it didn't work. He still couldn't understand a word. He turned away from the man, if he was deaf there was nothing the man could tell him.

"Dalam! Dalam you dark elf pig!" Dalam felt a hand grip him and pull him back, his Sergeant, a tall bulky nord sized him up. Sounds were beginning to come back to him, screams of people dying, the roaring of their opponent and the crash of orders as they echoed around him "You better not be running from battle son." Dalam looked behind the nord and inspected the others that were crouching down. He frowned and placed the helmet atop his head, his shaking hands making the action clumsy and awkward.

"Give me your spear." Dalam stated, his voice was shaky and hoarse. Cautiously, the Sergeant handed the imperial steel spear, it's crimson wrappings hidden by Dalams large dark hands. Without looking back at the nord, Dalam leapt to his feet and looked over the boulder. Towards his opponent.

The dragon perched itself atop a small hill, its' massive tail whipping against the cold air while it's fire scorched the earth, melting the ice around it. A dozen or so well armed imperial soldiers surrounded it, they fired arrows, bashed shields and lept magic from their hands but the dragon shook it all off. It's massive black scales seemed impenetrable, it's bright blue eyes seemed to stare into a mans soul. At first, Dalam hesitated but quickly charged towards the beast. His deep red eyes scanned the terrain, they were surrounded by tall cliffs with snow covering it all, No escape. The dragon roared again as a spear plunged through it's wing. It staggered back and ripped it out with it's teeth before pouncing upon the attacker and eating him whole. At the sight a few fled to cover allowing Dalam to get near the beasts feet.

He was close now. So close he could touch it. So close he could hear both their heart beats. He blinked and time stood still. His senses were hightened, he could smell the snow, hear the birds in the sky and see every minute detail. He heard shouts of appraise from his fellow soldiers, he could see the dragon watching him, it's snout a few inches away from Dalams head. He didn't feel fear, it was as though the weight of the world had been lifted from his shoulders and thrown to the wind. He watched as he slowly thrust the spear tip towards his opponent, the scales reflecting off of the cold steel. Red eyes met blue. Darkness.

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Edited a few things in the first few paragraphs because they were stupid. : )

You need to change "it's" to "its"; "its" is possessive while "it's" is the contraction. But other than that, it seemed pretty good. I didn't spot any other, major, reoccurring issues.

Thought I was beyond those errors by now! Woops!

Thanks though.