Running in Blind: Chapter 1

Post » Thu May 03, 2012 1:20 am

Linked for your convenience! Arcade Gannon and Female OC. No six or romance (thank God. I'm so tired of those, especially with Arcade. Seems they'll ship him with anyone or anything!)
Feel free to reply here or on there. I'm really proud of this, but I've only got the first chapter up right now to gauge interest, and I'd really,really appreciate some feedback!
Thank you so much!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7709831/1/Running_in_Blind
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sally coker
 
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 1:52 am

Just kidding...wound up putting up Chapter 2 as well, which should appear within about 30 minutes of this posting. I realized that 1, while a good hook for non-FO players, won't really reveal a lot about the story other than what players already know.
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Leilene Nessel
 
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 6:41 pm

I enjoyed the first two chapters, very good detail, flow of story and easy to follow, also implantation of known Fallout characters is always a plus. I'd say you have a good start.
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Sam Parker
 
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:34 am

Gosh, thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback!
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