Hi, all

I've made my second oblivion story video, and i would like to share it with your guys. I should like it if you give it a rating on 10 and a little word about what's good what's bad. This is probably the last Oblivion Story i made so enjoy. The music is from the Movies "Gladiator" "Blood Diamond" and "The Last Samurai". Click on the folowing link to watch: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aPzO_6Tzz-s


Grtz :foodndrink:

This got me hooked! Beautiful, and really well done! You should make more.

Well met!!
I don't want to gush like a schoolgirl... but, oh hell.... fantastic job! :foodndrink:
Really great. Stirred me. I love how you did not include the sound effects from the game.
Some thoughts:
Clean up that jerky panning and you're in like Flynn.
I liked the messages in the beginning, describing what was going on, but in the middle of the movie, I thought you could have combined some of them, or let the actions speak for themselves, rather than having a redundant description. Also, check your spelling.
You have a great ear for choosing the right-mood music with the action. Kudos!!
The bow shot down the stairs at the Imperial Guard when rescuing Fatiel's friend; fricking nice camera angle.
The "backstab" move on the guard in the hallway. Sweet.
Clenching his side as he flees. Genius.

Again, fantastic job. I look forward to more viewings.

Hi, i thank you for your review! You're right i have to let the video explain more than the text, like in my first video. But i just want to make the story clear to the Viewers, so that they can follow the story without problems! Second indeed my spelling level is low :brokencomputer: , in my first video i've made many big spelling mistakes! I've mention more on that while making this video, but like i heard you i still make spelling mistakes :/ I'm sorry for that! Maybe i have to pay more attention in the English lesson :shifty:. I thank you again for your time and i hope more people will respond! :celebration:

Grtz :foodndrink:

The story was perhaps a tad predictable and the spelling was rather mediocre...
...but on the whole I thought it was fantastic! :goodjob: