Am a brand new Rper and playing a DID character which i would like to describe it as my character progresses. I would like constructive criticism.


Character

Name : Vishnu Shresta
Ethnicity : Asian
Age : 26
Gender : male
Height : 5.11
Weight : 165kg

Hair Style : TheUnsettler
skin color : Slightly Brown
Eye color : Brown
Body build : Medium
Appearance : Asian , Mixture of a Tibetan and Indian Origin with US accent also there is a scar seen slightly below his neck

Clothes

Merc Troublemaker outfit

Weapons

Lead pipe
10mm pistol with no ammo

Background

I used to be a prospector based in the former West Virginia region where small communities where formed around Charleston. On his travels he often heard news from travelling merchants of a leading mutant infestation in central DC and how Washington DC had becomes a war-zone among several mercenary factions,mutants. He would in usual conditions not bother travelling to DC as he figured out that the place was too dangerous even though he knew DC wasteland would be treasure house of old world artifacts and weapons.

One fine midnight my town gets violently attacked by raiders and slavers . What little resistance the town put up did not last for more than an hour. Me with a few of my neighbors tried defending the town in rather intense but hopeless house to house fire fights. 45 minutes into the fight the a bullet greases through my right shoulder and another one hits my left shoulder, minutes later I collapse.

I wake up next morning completely tied up and unable to move . I had been moved inside the warehouse where other town guards were tied up along with the women and children. The slavers were just getting ready to move their bounty into a nearby slavers camp. By Mid day the slavers decided to move their slaves. The raiders also soon left with the entire stash of food , medicine and ammo which was in the town.. but as I would noticed..the slavers did not seem to have access to slave collar and had to tie up their slaves to get them transported. Soon the slaves were all boarded into a cage which was pulled by a pack Brahmin which was being lead to a large slaver camp in DC where they would be sold. 2 hours into entering DC the slavers are attacked by a largely unknown group according to me who had long Brown coats and cowboy hats. 15 minutes into the fire fight ,a few bullets hits the locks of the cages leading to panic ,resulting in an attempted escape of the slaves.. Few of the slaves are killed in the firefight but Vishnu manages to escape. I check my wounds and find that his wounds had been patched up by the slavers.Usually this would only be the case if they would get a hefty price for a slave.After running for a few minutes having lost sight of the slavers I stops to take a breather and looks around ...

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I check myself of my possessions and at the moment all i have is my mercenary armor a 10mm pistol which i managed to steal in the middle of the firefight and lead pipe . First thing i should do is go on top of an elevated position and check my surroundings and where i am actually at.

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After checking where i am actually at i decide to head towards the distant building which apparently seemed to be well maintained . Hopefully i will be able to find civilization there and some shelter on the way ill also check out the old power station. Hopefully i can find something valuable in that power station i can trade for some food and supplies later on..

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Just some books and a few tools here and there. Should be enough to get me something to eat.. As i move out of the power station he realizes its getting dark and I will need to find some kind of shelter . I had earlier heard from travelling merchants about the packs of night ghouls which roamed DC wasteland at night, and he did not want to get caught outside(MMM mod) . As I move towards the tower , I notice how the area is completely barren and empty , the only noises I could here were the footsteps of the geckos and the buzz of the boatflies. I notice a small canyon and starts moving towards after noticing some movement i try to move a bit closer to inspect it.. but as unexpected I sees a Yo Guai ripping apart the flesh a poor waste lander who had becomes its unfortunate victim... Deciding not to mess with it too much i decide to sneak away ..

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It becomes almost dark and i reach the tower. after reaching the gate i end up hearing an argument between a ghoul and the guard inside. After listening though the conversation it becomes clear that the ghoul clearly wants access to the tower . He soon walks off after getting a rather blunt reply of being called a zombie. Hoping to get access to the tower i try speaking with the guard only to be declined permission to enter. The guard tells the area is under the authority of a person called Alyseter Tenpenny and i could only get in if i had 100 caps...

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Seeing the sun setting . I try to survey the surrounding area and notice a few ruins and an small building which looked like a grocery store. I enter the building and notice a few rad roaches . after squishing them i find a few bottles of intact nuka cola and few 100 year old steak. I decide the spend the night in the ruined store

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