The Swampland by Undisputed Enclave

Post » Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:18 pm

The Swampland by Undisputed Enclave.

Authors Note: This is a teaser to The Swampland...comments are greatly appreciated. The first chapter will be posted after I receive feedback. Please enjoy.


As the night slowly set onto the swamplands of Florida, the excruciating sounds of mutated crickets and gnats and the muffled growls of Alligators searching for a quick meal reign over the bloodied battlefield, armored bodies float through the crimson dyed water in a disturbing display of death. The honorable Knights and Paladins of the Brotherhood of Steel collide against the advanced hordes of the Enclave, hatred running through their veins as they murder without mercy and without remorse. The young and even the old fight this war murdering each other only to gain a few feet before they are cut down by gunfire. As everyday passes more bodies began to pile, vandalizing the once natural swamplands with their mutilated corpses. This is war?and war never changes.

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Haley Cooper
 
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Post » Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:08 pm

I like it. Very nice. I just wish it was longer, but oh well.


10/10. Albeit short, the writing was magnifique. :goodjob:
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Kevin S
 
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Post » Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:05 am

Hot damn! Can't wait to see this!...I give it.... 10/10!
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Jonathan Egan
 
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Post » Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:23 am

Looks promising :goodjob: waiting for more!
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