Holotape log 12.24.43.334.53
"Jesus christ they finally did it, i saw the mushroom clouds a few minutes ago i bet anything chicago is gone i cant write right now we have to leave"
"Im back, we are in the car going away from the clouds... i never thought it would happen, i never thought china had the balls to challenge us...
we are heading to my grandpa's house he has a fallout shelter, thank god i made this portable terminal... ill write soon but i must go"
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I know its not that good but im bored and wanted something to do if i should continue please vote^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Deadly short length, but good story. Oh, and WHATEVER YOU DO, dont make them come out of the shelter the next day, or let them open up the place to 'look around'. Earth wasent livable until 50 years after the bombs fell.

K thnks i probly wont continue till 2marrow but it will be much much longer.

Needs to be longer.

Thats pretty much it, You kind of shot yourself in the foot by being stuck in a bunker.

(PS: Grandpa's House better be close because your guys should be dying of radiation, if they can see the mushroom cloud, a layer of invisible radiation is right about to sizzle the flesh off their bones...)

^^^ This. They should be dead already. But then again, when has Fallout 3 ever stayed true to the rules of the real world?

:hehe:

Never.

Holo ta{{{corrupt log validation}}}

"Grandpa's shelter is huge, mom said it would be cramped but weve each got our own rooms. Grandpa built an airtight viewport about the size of two rulers stacked on top of each other with a built in geiger counter... we just saw a group wandering around the streets there skin was melting and one of them just collapsed i assume he died because the gieger counter has been going crazy...

Holo diary 23.46.234.54.56
"I guess since i have so much time on my hands now that i should explain, my name is Colt Harris i live in Illinois two days ago on October 23, 2077 i saw two gigantic mushroom clouds to the north so i assume Chicago is gone we are now in Kankakee, still in Illinois in side my grandpas sealed fallout shelter under the streets of Kankakee we are safe for now, until the foods run out, until the water gets too polluted, until...well i have to go

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I know its short but i had to go. ill do some more later today or tonight please input like the others already did. :nuke:

Are you using a word processor? I would suggest you do and fix those typos!

Other than that, I kinda feel left out on the other characters and its really short

Thank you shadowman13 for the suggestion.


Ive got quiet abit written down already but im not all the way finished on this segment so ill finish it up tonight and i will post tomorrow

Holo diary 23.46.234.54.57

"Mom said it would be a good idea to let all of the family write their diaries in MY terminal to give us all something to do, I guess grandpa is first in line?"

Profile create: PAPY
Validation?23.46.234.54.56?
"Hello my name is John Harris, but it's papy to the family. We are all holed up in our personal six room "vault"."

Maintenance Notes:
Clean Air Filter, Once a week
Refresh Generator fusion cells, Daily
Make sure to keep the gun safe key hidden.

Weapon List:
Model 1897 shotgun
Browning Lever action repeater
.44 six shot revolver
END log?

"Its Colt im back, papy put some sort of lock on his profile and I don't like it one bit, he shouldn't be hiding things from us, im going to confront him later and get him to tell me the passkey. Mom says its Suzy's turn, that's my sister by the way."
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This is the longest one yet and I used spellchecker this time and I have plans for the next installment that add a twist but I don't know how to fit it in yet, so ill post it when I get around to it.

Still dreadfully short.

It's alright, but you don't post that much.

^^^ what do you mean, that i dont post must in general or just this story/thing.