It was a dark seemingly peaceful night on the roads of Falkreath Hold. The imperial solders didn't noticed that a pair of eye followed them. One of them stopped and relieved himself at one of the pine trees.

"Rawr! they desecret my territory" thought Dro'basha" Like those hunters yesterday, nobody hunt or sign in my hunter ground"

Then he felt that his fangs and limbs enlarged as he felt the urge the Beast inside. Quickly he hide in the forest so the prey didn't hear the painful Metamorphosis, when they noticed it was too late. The beast was upon them. They didn't stand a chance. When the wolf ripped of the last imperial head from his body he suddenly felt a hunger for human flesh. The forest's owls saw later that a lonely kajjhit stand next one of the Pine trees Leaving his sign there. It was Dro'basha Harbringer of the Companions.



Soo, it is my first attempt to write a little background for my Khajjit char so feedback is appreciated. Anyway im Hungarian and my english is far from perfect. But if you like it maybe i can wrote a lot more if you want.


Oh and if you want write down your own Werewolf adventures what happened ingame.

Anyone? Someone? Opinions? Fellow werewolfs I know you out there!

You've posted this in the wrong section. ;p


Edit: The story you wrote makes little sense anyway. I found it difficult to picture any of it. I don't think your English is the problem, but rather the "structure" you use when you write.

"The imperial solders didn't noticed that a pair of eye followed them. One of them stopped and relieved himself at one of the pine trees."
A sentence like this could be written like this:

The Imperial Guards, unmoved by the chilling wind and eerie noises in the night, allowed themselves their guards down. The yellow eyes of the beast watched them from afar; hidden by the shadows of the night.
Jumping up and down in his station, one of the guards handed the torch to his friend. 'Hold this," said he, and ran over to a nearby pine tree. He let out a long, drawn-out sigh as he drained his lizard. 'Aaaah...'


Hope you see where I'm getting at. :>

Ahh okay thanks your feedback. Actually this was my first attempt to wrote some little story in English .


Ps.: Mods sorry to post this in the wrong section on the forums so can someone move it to the correct section?

"Nice to hear something from fellow Khajiit. Raksha is no werewolf herself, but has nothing against them, as long as they can control their aggressiveness."

"In fact, Raksha once was involved in some werewolf chasing, wanted to reason with everybody to stop this stupid killing, and only creature who wanted to reason was this werewolf. Others involved, including Khajiits, just attacked Raksha on sight... It was sad experience for Raksha, but at least she had learned that werewolves can be nice and very strong allies."

"Warm welcome to you!"

"In Dro'basha's clan were werewolfs since the ancient times down to Dro'basha's great-great-grandfather.Who was Dro'bahsa too. He would be very proud for this humble one.
They taught this one how can he overcome the bloodlust, and be cunning and clever in the skin of The Great One. Perhaps humble Raksha met one of our kind. But Raksha must be on guard, because there are the Lost Ones who are once hurt the clan of Dro'basha. But this one not want to speak about it."

"May you walk on warm sand."

It's a good story and your English is fine. But this should either be in the Skyrim spoiler section or fanfiction section.

"This one thanks the kind words."

yeah ive already reported my fault to the moderators.Shame on me.