The Wasteland RP

Post » Sat May 28, 2011 8:56 am

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Mizz.Jayy
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 6:32 am

Jack shot three bullets from his assualt rifle at some Super Mutants up ahead, a bullet hit the super mutants head and it exploded. The other two bullets missed a Super mutant ran up to jack with a bat in its hands. Jack dodged the mutants swing and smacked the rifle in the mutants jaw Jack then opened fire on the mutant ripping holes through it's chest. The last super mutant ran towards Jack but before he came close Jack blew its leg off. He picked up the bat and walked up to the one legged super mutant. "PAIN HURRRRRRRRRT" yelled the Mutant.
"Your damn straight" said Jack as he lifted up his bat and smashed it on the mutants head.


That was good but when you said "The other two bullets missed a super mutant ran up to jack with a bat in it's hands."
That sort' of confused me try " The other two bullets alerted the other super mutant, and it started to rush towards Jack with a baseball bat in its hands."
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Schel[Anne]FTL
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 11:24 pm

That was good but when you said "The other two bullets missed a super mutant ran up to jack with a bat in it's hands."
That sort' of confused me try " The other two bullets alerted the other super mutant, and it started to rush towards Jack with a baseball bat in its hands."

Thanks fixed that up do you want to join this???
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Setal Vara
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 3:41 am

((OOC: No offense but this might not kick off. You should've waited for more people. Right now there isn't much of a backstory and there are only like four people in this. You should've waited at least two more hours. At least three more people, then start the actial thing..


EDIT: Only one person joined-- Why did you start it with only one person?!))
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Nitol Ahmed
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 10:33 am

((I don't mean to be offensive, so i'll try not to. The RP has the LONE WANDERER in it, which no one likes, because everyone knows what happens with the LW, so its no surprises, or cool secrets.

Like the guy above me said, not much of a backstory, and one person. Maybe you should close this and try again in the future?))
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brian adkins
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 2:49 am

((I don't mean to be offensive, so i'll try not to. The RP has the LONE WANDERER in it, which no one likes, because everyone knows what happens with the LW, so its no surprises, or cool secrets.

Like the guy above me said, not much of a backstory, and one person. Maybe you should close this and try again in the future?))

Yah but something hapens with wanderer
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Emzy Baby!
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 4:55 am

((OOC: Whether or not something does, you still only have one person. Bad time to start the RP.))
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James Baldwin
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 11:43 pm

Aye. Give us at the sign ups a day to get ready. You did just post the idea after all. ))
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maya papps
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 6:59 pm

OK then this is sign up now
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marina
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 6:54 am

Close this thread
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Racheal Robertson
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 9:56 am

Close this thread

Yes I am going to. You opened this despite being told by me that you should not maintain a sign up and a RP for the same thing. I am not a happy bear. :stare:
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