my OC thread for evaluation

Post » Wed Jul 04, 2012 12:13 pm

Name:Ulfr Aelabria

Race : Nord

six : Male

Height : 200 cm

Weight : 92kg

build : athletic (altough slender)

Class : Gladiatore (murmillo with dimachaeri skills)
Specialization: Combat
Favored Attributes: Strength and Speed
Major Skills: Blade, Blunt, Security, Acrobatics, Athletics, Block, and Heavy Armor
the Murmillo is set for men with long muscular arms able to carry on a heavy tower shield and a Gladium or a Spata and a heavy helm with a visor and a manica (shoulder and gauntlet armor made of steel or cloth) and heavy greaves and boots

Ulfr as a murmillo
after his release he realized that the gladiatorial stile of fight gave him an advantage and disadvantages over the normal warrior due his high training no other normal warrior matched him in close combat some times displaying horrendous dismembering displays in front of a bringand party making the rest flee, in other spot no arrows or acrobats or magi where spotted on the arena of his distant land before so he adopted the dimachaeri way of fighting by using two swords while keeping his agressive but methodic wielding as a murmillo he found that his long and powerfull arms made him able to carry on two long swords and so he did

Birthsign: The Tower

Age: 23

Armor: custom made armor

due his experience on the arena he developed a custom armor fit giving him the advantaje of heavy armor padding where is necesary and medium and even light armor allowing him to keep much of his mobility in the arena and a higher possibility to endure arrow attacks he kept a heavy armor pad in the chest while covering his upper body to his whrists with a chainmail shirt opened in the upper part of the shoulders where pads covered the muscle, armor padding hold tight to his legs facing the outer angle with leather straps and a inner pant made of soft cotton made his greaves, heavy shin guards and light armor sandals befitted with armor paddings made his boots leaving his ankle free to provide movement and a corrugated leather sole to provide grip with black cotton socks to hide his pale skin in the ankle the armor was full of "feathered wolfs" details painted by himself using a black ink and a thin brush his helmlet was a winged masked helm with a cross shaped visor

Description:

his tall and slender build and his blonde and long hair made the native classify him as a nord his skin is abnomrally pale even for his race, he usually cover it with inner soft cotton clothes where his armor doesnt let him wearing a scarf below his helm his skin is also unscarred unless for a X shaped scar in his chest something hard to archieve for a gladiator, his eyes are brown, deep and smalland has edgy but masculine facial atributes, populated but thin eyebrows and mid sized ears, his voice is deep and vibratorial but it is juvenile, a sign that it changed too early in his childhood, it changes radically when he enangers and can himitate perfectly well the roaring, grunting and howling of a wolf or any beast earning him some nicknames by ocational companions

Atributes and traits

even that is said that strenght and speed are his main atributes Ulfr is also very very very intelligent that is shown because he is a incredibly fast learner and have a very creative mind he is midly quiet and very realist altough he never lose the faith he is christian an unknown religion in tamriel he is often found with a group of other adventurers talking about his God and his teachings but he ever respects everyones beliefs, and ever prefer to avoid arguing he even gained some people's to his beliefs but he is not interested in form any cult now, he is the kind of person that ever find something epic to say some people like it and even laugh at it some other don't but he ever answers with a sunrise making him someone really hard to argue or fight with unless you commit the mistake to get phisical

as a warrior ulfr is surprisingly agressive and unmercyfull even when he likes a good fight and have high honour standarts he gives no quarter unless his rival doesn't really represent a menace in wich case he only inmobilize it and often humilliate it in order to lower his ego and teach him a lesson

"Weapons serve but one single use... to take other people's lifes... the only difference is the purpose of your wielding... to protect, to defend is different that pridefull and improductive ranting"

he ever is in the search of adventure and is willing to help anyone in need but he will never do unfair tasks unlawfull is different if it is fail and making good, he saw a imperial party evictionating a family in disgrace, then he only asked them to give one hour and he will come with the money to stop them, then silently went to a slavers cave to massacre them, free the slaves and then sell everything valuable inside and give the septims to a unempoyed father and his baby girl who was about to lose his home the 8 years old little lady nicknamed him "the silent angel", days after that the little girl was spotted with two sticks in his belt and a winged helmet made of paper, sticks and leaves even when her friends laugh at her she pridefully walked with his new hero costume and ignored them

well thats pretty much everything i will be writing more about him if you like it and even i will come with an illustration... hope ya like it
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Post » Wed Jul 04, 2012 5:33 am

arrival to tamriel

-so you want to know how i got here ?...- he grasps and rests himself against the wall - haha... it was almost 2 years ago... we where my doctore... six other gladiators and me on this ship... gladiators in my land are a little bit more than slaves... and we where in a cell with the prisoners... of course we where the only with food, clothes and the strenght to rip off a head with our bare hands... a storm punished the ship i had to hold myself agaist a wall with other men not to hit the ceiling with every movement of the crushing ship... the guards came to free US and only US... we didn't agreed... those prisoners where humans too... well at least for us... they looked each other... and driven by mercy they agreed, up on the deck the situation was worse... the sailors were being catapulted by the strenght of the sea hiting the hull with all his anger, strange red coloured rays and deafening thunders all arround like the heavenly reign was about to fall with all his weight to us... then it opened... now i know what is an oblivion gate... but... what was doing an oblivion gate in MY world?... i dont know what happened after that... only that i waked up... with my deadly wounded doctore... in middle of the sands of VVanderfell-
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