Old Project/Teaser: Looking for Critique

Post » Wed Sep 19, 2012 11:30 am

A long time ago, me and Crazyfist were going to make a dueltage called victor. It was going to be different, entertaining, serious, and visually awesome. I have long since stopped making that montage, but I did make an intro for it, and I figured the community that I love deserves to see it. Tell me what you guys think, I am looking for constructive criticism.



P.S. I am sorry that the slow-motion is choppy. It isn't in the RAW file, but is on youtube. It annoys the crap out of me.
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Angela Woods
 
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Post » Wed Sep 19, 2012 8:36 am

To be honest, intro looks cheap. it would be better if you deleted that part with moving pictures of cell and marine on weird yellow background, and if you changed those plain white letters with some nice 3D looking text.

PS. Too bad if you had to abandon the project, because it would be something of great entertaining value.
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Joey Avelar
 
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Post » Wed Sep 19, 2012 11:00 am

Reminds me of things I haven't finished either.
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