Whenever I talk to my vampire children or clan vampires/cattle about Embrace I get this response: "I heard vampires sometimes embrace their worthy victims. I'm glad there are no vampires here." I ran my setup through mlox and no errors detected on load order.

I tracked it down to Vampiric Hunger Extended. Looking in the dialogue box function/variables it has 2 spots left open. I'm not to sure about which functions to try and fix it for me. I was looking to try Not Faction on Clan Aundae but I don't to put it as an =1 or =0. The other I was going to try was a Global on emb_mychilde=0.

Does anyone dialogue/script savvy know if that will help clear up this minor annoyance or have any suggestions?

Yeah, looking at the dialog in Vampire_Embrace.esp, it looks like your plan to check emb_mychilde and faction will work. Don't really see anything obviously better.

Got it sorted it out as far as I can tell. I haven't tried it on someone turned against their will but on everything else it checks out.