RP- Fly me to the Moon

Post » Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:45 pm

Basically anyone can join, please no spam. This story is unoriginally-original. (Unoriginal in time and place but original in story line).

It takes place in Washington D.C. (The capital waistland) and time setting is post war. Be original with your characters, yeah its a RP but who likes to read the same thing over and over again?

Fireflys Character:

Name: Arian (Air-ee-ann) Hope Sauderman Age: 17 DOB: July 2

Race: caucasian/american Gender: Female Profession: Cartographer (map-maker)/ Artist

Skills:
Fairly intelligent
Moderate in strength
Very good perception
Great with computers
Likable
Good at persuading
Endurance varies

Height: 5 feet 3in Skin: White Hair: just past shoulder, Light brown

Build: Short and toned but no stand-out muscles Eyes: Blue

Clothing/Weapons:
Short white undershirt that cuts off mid-waist. Padded vest for easy storage of pencils, paper, and most important bullets. Slightly beat up pair of jeans and army boots. She carries 3 weapons. A .44 magnum in her holster on her right hip, on her right, a knife, and on her back a combat shotgun, all things she bought from a merchant before she left Rivet City.

Unique Characteristics:
~Hums when working or alone
~Says Gao when frustrated
~Plays with hair when embarrassed
~Great cook even though never taught to cook

Summary of History:
From very young age Arian always drew pictures from anywhere she could, her favorite place was to be on the flight deck drawing pictures of what she could see from the waists. Always afraid of what was out their but when she was 17, a traveler came to Rivet City and changed her mind about the waists and soon she intended to use her artistic skills to help man kind by mapping the surprisingly unmapped waistland. Anytime she wasnt drawing she was helping her father maintain computers and lighting to keep Rivet City running. Never killed anything, never held a weapon in her life until she get caps and goes off with the traveler.

(As of right now she is still in Rivet City and no traveler has changed her mind about the waists, hopefully that traveler is one of you)


Hope we can all have fun and enjoy writing together. Since this is an RP and im assuming we are all mature, we will allow profanity as long as its kept in the story context and not directed at someone >.> Before we begin lets have a few people make character profiles so that no one is frantically trying to think of something for their characters to do/say/look like etc. lol

P.S. pm me if you have questions
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StunnaLiike FiiFii
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:51 am

Ok since you just joined yesterday, I'm going to tell you to get involved with Rps before creating your own on here. You may already have some Rp experience, but on here it is important to have a story, not just some Character Sheet, and some rules. What you have here, is a failure without a story.
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Ana
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:29 am

First welcome
:foodndrink:

And that is true, get involved.
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Emma louise Wendelk
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:14 am

Well i do have a personal story, i just do things my own way and this is a roll play not a fanfic, rps can really do anything right? Im not going to tell a person what they are to do in a free for all story.
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Lucky Girl
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:03 am

Well your Rps have to have a basic story that the players follow. Open ended Rps usually fail in the first couple of days for one reason: No way of knowing what to do. Yes, it's fun to just go do what you want. But an Rp is not just do what you want. It should have a story that everyone can get involved with. Read "So you think you can Rp". It is sticked at the top.
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naana
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 11:59 am

Thanks for trying to help and all, ive already read it though, i hope i dont sound rude but i just want someone, it doesnt matter who really, to rp with me and i can start on the actual story part
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:20 am

Listen to the Doctor, he knows what you need
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darnell waddington
 
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Post » Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:43 pm

I have a question do we get to go to the moon in this?
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tiffany Royal
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:46 am

Listen to the Doctor, he knows what you need


He is the only one who can prescribe awesome.
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Kevin Jay
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:12 am

How are you supposed to do anything without a story. Most, not if all people on here need a story to intrigue them to join. Just saying, "Oh please join my Rp, I have no story, but we can still have fun?" just doesn't cut it. You need a story to lure people over, and then and only then, will you know if you have a good Rp. Right now, like I said it is a failure because you have no story. If you like, I can assist with some ideas? Unless you'd like to come up with some on your own?

But really, you need a firm story, something that people can work with, giving them enough room to move around and stuff.
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:14 pm

How are you supposed to do anything without a story. Most, not if all people on here need a story to intrigue them to join. Just saying, "Oh please join my Rp, I have no story, but we can still have fun?" just doesn't cut it. You need a story to lure people over, and then and only then, will you know if you have a good Rp. Right now, like I said it is a failure because you have no story. If you like, I can assist with some ideas? Unless you'd like to come up with some on your own?

But really, you need a firm story, something that people can work with, giving them enough room to move around and stuff.



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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 10:32 am

If you haven't noticed already Dr. Strangelove has a small cult following, specifically for the fact that he is very good at coming up with ideas, If i were you i'd take him up on the offer to show you some tips, Lord knows i'd love for him to show me how to improve my RP lol
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:46 am

If you haven't noticed already Dr. Strangelove has a small cult following, specifically for the fact that he is very good at coming up with ideas, If i were you i'd take him up on the offer to show you some tips, Lord knows i'd love for him to show me how to improve my RP lol


Like my sig says, I'm here to help. PM me if you want some assistance on your Rp, Inferoo?
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Post » Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:57 pm

First things first, we need a story
second things first, give more detail on the world
third things first, give more plot detail
fourth things first, need more rp experiance to see how things are done
fifth things first, get experiance at the TES forum, more experiance there to help you grow.
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Philip Lyon
 
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Post » Mon Mar 29, 2010 2:40 am

First things first, we need a story
second things first, give more detail on the world
third things first, give more plot detail
fourth things first, need more rp experiance to see how things are done
fifth things first, get experiance at the TES forum, more experiance there to help you grow.


:D I like the first four things... The fifth though... Your completely right but some people don't know TES law may I remind you? :P Some people only come on here for Fallout! :ahhh:
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