To the far south of Tamerial, an island rests. It is known as Pyandonea, and it is the land of the Maormer, Elves that have magic far beyond the bounds of those in Tamerial. The Maormer train sea serpents to do there bidding, and they rules the south. It is impossible to Navigate there islands to all but the best navigators. But even then the serpents swallow there ships. They were not heard of since 3E 110, where there fleet was whiped out ina freak storm. There king, Orgnum Thras, was an immortal wizard, with a coffer that will make gold out of nothing. He was killed during the storm that destroyed there fleet, but now a young Maormer that is Orgnum Thras's decendent with the same name as Orgnum rises to be the leader, and is ready for war. But the land of the Maormer is planning something. An invasion on Tamerial. Already they have captured multiple crews of ships. Thats were you are.
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You are one of the captured men on the ships. Your mission will be mainly to escape and get back to Tamerial, or follow your own agenda.
Sound OK? If not, what needs changes? Should I even have bothered at all to type this up?