Well since my last RP svcked and nobody posted I have an idea for a new RP it is not much right now but here it is.

Project Untitled,

You are a group of people from San Francisco and you were told by a rich buisness man that some people have fixed up an old boat and are offering a trip to a place that has many glorious riches you gladly accepted this offer and boarded the boat to a strange island called Hawaii for all the items that you could sell back in San Francisco for tons of caps or keep it for yourselves. But what you did not know about this cruise it that it was run by a sick group that calls themselves the Watchers and while on the boat ride they knocked you unconsious and striped you of all your items and put you in a white t shirt and blue jeans with old runners. You then awake in Hawaii with nothing to defend yourselves and you have to reach the Watchers to get back to San Francisco or die on the island. Obviously this is a Survival RP it will be really fun I am hoping.

No, no, no! First mistake was having a 'strange man' who told you about a place with great riches. You don't even say what the riches are. But then you mentioned Hawaii. That shouldn't be there, because Hawaii wouldn't exist. It's so small, it wouldn't survive a nuke. If it didn't get hit, it was swallowed by the ocean. Then some people attack you and take all your stuff- but why? And now you're on the island and need to get back home. Please try something else. Hawaii is acceptable, but another boring "survival" RP just isn't fun anymore.

This is just a rough draft holly [censored] dont have to be such an ass

No. What you just did was be an ass. I provided ALOT of useful information on how you should improve and you snap at me telling me I'm an ass? You wouldn't make a very good RPer, it's no wonder nobody joins your RP's. You need to learn how to accept someone for their opinion, not insult them for it.

You know what I said it was not much right now in the first post if you would of been more observent you would of realized it and hey you know how many people joined the Manhattan War 1 & 2 TONS alright so dont go saying that nobody joins my RP alright because lots have and they have said that they had alot of fun and for the last time rough draft and I am never taking your advice.

If you don't take the reader's advice you will never, NEVER be a successful RPer. Just because you had one good RP, doesn't mean they will all be. You shouldn't be getting all pissed like you are now. Chill, and try listening to the readers. The way I see it is that you can't handle criticism.

Yes I can but you were saying that this wouldnt work and all that and it made no sense this is just an idea it is not fully done and sorry.
And I have only had three RPs that were actually put into play which is the Wasteland, TMW 1 and 2

Well, if I offended you, I apologize. I never said the idea wouldn't work, though. All I said was it made no sense because Hawaii wouldn't exist, and some of the stuff in there was distasteful for my opinion, but nothing to get worked up about. I'm done arguing, I'd hate to be the reason this gets locked.

Yeah but I was going to saw that Hawaii was not hit by a Nuke it was sorta like the Pitt and the water was contaminated so most of the people in Hawaii were ghoulafied and they rest went to tribes. There is still trees but no grass

I personally think Hawaii is a good idea. Remember one thing. This is fiction. If someone wants to create a post apocalyptic Hawaii what's wrong with that? It's an idea,and a pretty good one at that. If all RPs were created within the bounds of what is real and possible, all Rps would become derivative and boring. I'd like to hear maore as the story is fleshed out. This has potential.

Well that's what I meant when I said Hawaii wouldn't exist. If it wasn't hit by a nuke, then, scientifically, so many parts of the earth's crust are moving- causing massive, and I mean MASSIVE hurricanes and waves in the oceans, and all or most islands unnaffected by bombs would be swallowed whole by the ocean. You should just say Hawaii was hit by weaker bombs, it would really help.

Or maybe just a whole bunch of Missiles?

Either that, my idea, or very few nukes. It's really the only way Hawaii would've survived.

Is it really that important how Hawaii survived?

Actually yeah, it could have certain terrain added from different ways.

Unless you want your RP looking like crap and like it only took you a few minutes to make, then yes.

Ok how about this !


The year is 2300, you are all resedents of the city of San Francisco one day I fully working boat came to the Docks which is a very large settlement. The boat contained a group of men that said they are from a island called Hawii (Hawaii) they offered a trip to this place which held many valuble items such as working Pre War T.V.s and many other things and these Pre War treasures would go to anybody willing to accept the ride. Only a few people accepted the others were either to scared to go or did not want to leave San Francisco, the people that decided to go on the travel boarded the boat with whatever supplies they needed and were on there way. But what this group of people did not know is the the people on this boat were a group of people that called themselves The Watchers and they would go to many cities on the West Coast shore and take them to Hawii to be forced to survive they would think of it as some sort of game. When you were all sleeping in the boats Barracks you were all knocked unconsious by a gas that they put in your room and when you awoke you were in Hawii and infront of you all was a radio that reapeated this message

"Attention people of San Francisco you are all probably wondering were you are and what happened well let me explain you are all on the West coast of Hawii and you were all striped of your supplies and equipment all you have is the ragedy clothes on your back and know you must all get to the East side of the Island to get back to San Francisco or die getting there the people that make it to our luxurious Mansion will be rewarded with one thousand caps and a trip back to San Francisco. And yes I know what you are all thinking that we tricked you so you could put us in this sick little game of yours! And if you are thinking that well then you are right. Hahahahah you will have to get to the other side of the island to survive but do not think it will be so easy you will have to go throught the islands Tribals, Cannables and the islands horrible mutated creatures so let the game begin hahahah. Oh and by the way we will be dropping off suplies every now and then just to be fair and with each supplies crate will be a Holo Tape that might lead you in the right direction or into a death trap so have fun!"

And know you must get to the West coast of the Island to return to your home or die on the island.

Hawii Background.
When the war happened Hawaii was not a major target because of it's small size so it was just his with a single nuke that was small and it landed in the middle of the Island which is know the most dangerous part. There are still trees but only near the border of the island once you get deeper the green will go away.

Oh and the RP will mostly be in the Jungle you will run into some ruins but not much

It sounds good. One question; If thre are trees only around the edge of the island, and we have to cross the island to get away, how will most of it take place in the jungle? Unless the group sticks to the border and works their way around the coast.

Just a question.

To Nazgul read the sign up thread I changed it and this can be closed

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