I have finished a revised version of "Oblivifall - Something Is Not Right" by Cliffworms. After receiving his go ahead, I have uploaded it to Nexus mods.

At first I was just going to change all the lines of text to first person but after seeing that it was merely 40ish lines repeated over and over. I decided to expand the variety. Now almost all lines (over 430!) are different as well as being first person.

You can download it here...

http://www.nexusmods.com/oblivion/mods/46431/?

Martin