Well the Fallout Section is really going slow and I have no idea why it is not what it used to be is what I am basically saying but eh' what can you do? Well maybe this will help and get the Fallout Section back on track but maybe not?

T H E A S S A S S I N S

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T H E F A M I L Y

In the city of Detroit lies a secret organization of highly trained assassins who are highly paid but a group of people who are run by the leader of Detroit called The Detroit Deffenders are trying to take out this organization known only as The Company. The Company has been around since 2300 and has taken out over three hundred targets over the years and has over one hundred members. The headquarters of the Company is under the city of Detroit in an old military bunker that is unknown to everyone except the Company. There is only one way to join the Company and that is to kill someone unworthy of there life. Once this happens a represenitive of the Company will come to you at a random time and offer you a membership in the company and if you refuse you will be killed because no one must know about the Company. But if you accept you will go through the training process and chiped so they will allways no were you are at all times because they must never have anyone betraying them or the whole operation of The Company will be destroyed and everything will be over.

T H E D E T R O I T D E F E N D E R S

In the city of Detroit The Detroit Defenders act as the police and regulators of Detroit they are run by the Mayor of Detroit and there main priority is to eliminate the Company. They have been trying to eliminate the company since they were first reconized as an organization. The Peace Force has gotten closer and closer to finding out the secrets of the Company but many of the members are being picked off one by one as a warning to back off but they are not taking the warning kindly and are searching non stop for the Company and with them being very close will they finnaly find them only time will tell.

Sounds great josh hope you make it!!

Heres a suggestion, rename the Company to something like, "The Family," "Silencers, Inc.," "White Shadows Assassination Company."

The last one is actually being used in my fantasy novel as the assassins guild, so if you use the last one let me know so I can give you lore on them.

I would change Peaceforce to something like, "Detroit Defenders," "Guardians of Detroit," "The Wasteland Crusaders."

I woudnt use the wasteland crusaders because wasteland scalor has a great fan fic "The crusader" other then that DO IT

I don't know, the names right now sound sensible and fine. You don't need to make something sound "cool".

Damn you ringman, every time I see you post, I think it was me. Anyways, you have a nice idea, pretty original. (Jimmy) Kudos.

I will be making it.

I used the Detroit Deffenders thanks Zalphon.

Used the other one.

Thanks Shadow, would you be interested in it? And yeah I thought it was you to .

Possibly. This isn't an RP, correct?

Ummm....this is an RP. Sorry for the confusion?

Yes, well, your apology has been accounted for. No, I would not be interested, I must focus on my FanFic at the moment.

Thats okay.. I guess I could do a Fan Fic and an RP on this?

I'd do one or the other. For this? I'd go FanFic, but that's just me.

Hmmm....well I do not know I will think about it but for now this is considered an RP so.

Hey man, do whatever you want. This is your story, not mine. Good luck, then.

Thanks Shadow.

http://www.gamesas.com/bgsforums/index.php?showtopic=1053263

I hope this one is going to work and you stick with it.