Escape from Paradise falls!

Post » Tue Jun 22, 2010 9:38 pm

ok guys this is my first RP So I'll probably slip up
a bit but if i do please tell me :) story: You can either be a slave who has
been caught and has been in paradise falls for [insert how long] or a slaver who
works at paradise falls. The story is set in the year 2270,
7 years before the lone wanderer stepped out of the vault. The story shall consist
of escaping paradise falls and avoiding capture. If you want to be a part of this please
write your Bio down below :).
bio: Name: Alex Deacon.
six: male.
Age: 20
Back story: Alex became a caravan guard for his father when he was 15.
At the age of 18 raiders attacked the caravan on the way to megaton. The leader of
the group of raiders killed his father While alex was dealing with the rest of the
raiders, as he was distracted by the death of his father He was knocked unconcious by one of the raiders,
he woke up at paradise falls- a slave. His job is to go Scaving at the scrapyard for anything of use to the slavers.
equip: hidden bobby pin inside his arm.
The date is 22 of august 2270.
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Post » Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:25 am

well theres one problem its not 2070 or 2077
2070 is 7 years before the atomic bombs were dropped on the USA
its actually 2277 or 2270 for your RP
Plus i think this is the wrong area for a RP challenge
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Post » Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:12 am

This should be in the fan-fiction section.
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Post » Tue Jun 22, 2010 8:12 pm

ok guys this is my first RP So I'll probably slip up
a bit but if i do please tell me :) story: You can either be a slave who has
been caught and has been in paradise falls for [insert how long] or a slaver who
works at paradise falls. The story is set in the year 2070,
7 years before the lone wanderer stepped out of the vault. The story shall consist
of escaping paradise falls and avoiding capture. If you want to be a part of this please
write your Bio down below :).
bio: Name: Alex Deacon.
six: male.
Age: 20
Back story: Alex became a caravan guard for his father when he was 15.
At the age of 18 raiders attacked the caravan on the way to megaton. The leader of
the group of raiders killed his father While alex was dealing with the rest of the
raiders, as he was distracted by the death of his father He was knocked unconcious by one of the raiders,
he woke up at paradise falls- a slave. His job is to go Scaving at the scrapyard for anything of use to the slavers.
equip: hidden bobby pin inside his arm.
The date is 22 of august 2070.


[b]
THIS NEEDS A LOT MORE STORY!!![/b
]
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Post » Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:40 pm

well theres one problem its not 2070 or 2077
2070 is 7 years before the atomic bombs were dropped on the USA
its actually 2277 or 2270 for your RP
Plus i think this is the wrong area for a RP challenge

Yeah woops i musta no put a another 2 there :facepalm:
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Post » Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:50 am

[b]
THIS NEEDS A LOT MORE STORY!!![/b
]

This is the recuitment thread the story shall unfold in the RP
once they're more players
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Post » Tue Jun 22, 2010 8:36 pm

This is the recuitment thread the story shall unfold in the RP
once they're more players


You still need more story than that. No story, no recruits.
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Post » Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:32 am

This is the recuitment thread the story shall unfold in the RP
once they're more players


Until I see more story, count me out...

And shadow is right, story=recruits, without it, no recruits...
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Post » Wed Jun 23, 2010 9:30 am

Story, Detail, Description, Better CS, Rules, just Common Sense is what it needed. Then you'll be good.
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