Character Stories #7

Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 12:17 pm

Thanks guys! Well, Andy - they were pretty small mods.... I have no interest in "breaking" my mod addiction - I have a new mo'bettah machine, so yay for me! Eventually, I suppose I'll have to Smash some of the esps which will be an experience....



I had that happen once a long time ago, Neil. Probably not long after release.... That was the first time I used tgm in this game - because I kept dying to the first one.... and reloading.... and dying.... and reloading.... Eventually I just bagged "realism" and cheated. After finishing off Sahloknir, Delphie-baby waltzed up and started with her shpiel. Gah. Yeah, I don't LIKE HER ONE BIT. Speaking of arrogant....



After that one use of tgm that time, I finished the game about 4 times without using it at all. And after that, I just use it as a normal part of my game, because I'm SO not into messing about with pots and food and healing up and dying.... I explore, and I RP. I can RP the stuff without doing it in game....

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 11:24 am

Andra...Love how they handled Valdir one of my favorite side quests. Falkreath is very ...morbid, but I actually like it, the rain, huge tree's remind me of home.. at bit.



Neil... love the story...for some reason, my comment after the 1st part didn't show, I love the way Bel handles herself... moxy, the girls got moxy.



Lopov..... very griszly.. but good reading!



Serethil... ack... not my favorite place in the MQ...



I'm going to try and get an update by Wednesday, work is...hectic to say the least right now. Sale...new District manager... reset... yeah...fun.

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 9:17 am


Well, the entire thing's not my fav place.... but - Veri's running this show. Her and her damned honor.... Ouch. Your work doesn't sound.... um.... entertaining just right now.

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 1:00 pm

Okay, this segment (or chapter, however you want to think of it) officially ends part 1 and catches us all up to Bel's current status.



Hell Hath Not Enough Furies Chapter 3


The next morning, Bel headed to the market area to sell off some of the things she had acquired on her way to Riften. As she walked toward the entrance, she noticed a beggar and gave him one of her few remaining coins before continuing on. People in Hell shouldn't pass up a chance to do a good deed now and then.


Going on to an nasty-tempered armor vendor, she sold off everything she had for sale and noted with disappointment that she didn't get very much for it. Bel was certain that she would need to be much better prepared before she could face Gian with any chance of victory, and was quickly running out of options.


As she wandered about seeking any way to raise some money, a shady looking man approached her, and offered her money if she'd help him with a task. Bel guessed that he must have seen the desperation in her eyes, and decided to take advantage of her situation. As he described the task, she knew what he was asking was dishonest and illegal, but she HAD to have more money. In the end, she agreed. Really, it wasn't like she thought she should be worried about going to hell, eh? The shady man started some kind of sales spiel, and Bel moved around to where the strongbox lay hidden that she had been told to get into. As she went to open it, she made two immediate discoveries.



First, it was locked. Second, she had not even one single lockpick.


By all the Gods, now what was she going to do? Perhaps she could purchase a lockpick, but... all of the vendors were gathered around the shady man. She could just imagine that conversation "Excuse me, I need to break into a market strongbox... Could you sell me a lockpick from your stand and then return here to be distracted?"


Eeesh! Wait, she remembered seeing a pawn shop on a side street, and the owner would probably still be in his store. Bel ran to the "Brawny Prawn" pawn shop and hurried through the door.


The shopkeeper seemed a nice guy, and it turned out he had quite a few lockpicks. Unfortunately she could only afford about six of them. So she took four (never spend all that you have, eh?) and hurried out the door and back to the strongbox.


Bel wasn't very good at lockpicking, but she managed to open the box without breaking a single pick. She couldn't believe her good fortune, and a part of her wondered if Hell (or the Old Man) was somehow looking after her. With a soft cluck of her tongue, she completed the rest of the job, and soon had happily been paid... and even better, the shady man offered more employment if she'd meet him at some bar.


When Brynjolf (the shady man) told her where the bar was, and about the Ratway, Bel's interest was fully piqued. It sounded like exactly the sort of place where she expected to find Gian.


First though, she needed a spell or two... among other things.


A week later, Bel was ready to enter the Ratway in earnest. She'd bought a couple of spells, stolen some ingredients from the alchemy shop to make potions she needed, and had roamed the area around Riften practicing her combat skills on wolves and anything unlucky enough to cross her path.


She approached the door warily, and crouched, stepped inside. The unpleasant smells of wet, mossy stone and sewage assaulted her nose, but she shortly became acclimated and moved down a short flight of stairs. Once at the bottom, she moved silently forward, until she came to a place where she could move out of the direct pathway. Tucked in to a small alcove with a grated floor, she waited there until Drahff passed by going toward the entrance.


Quickly quaffing an invisibility potion, she moved rapidly down the corner and passed by Black-Skeever. The huge thug was almost preternaturally aware, and somehow he sensed her moving by.


"I'll rip out your guts!" and he raised his mace and whirled to move after her... but she was already past him, gone through a door and had dropped to a lower level where she hid in the deep shadows til he had gone.


Searching around carefully, she found there were two exits from the small area she was in. One was a locked gate to a flight of stairs leading up, the other a booby trapped door. Bel wanted to make sure she had a way out, so she attempted to pick the lock on the gate. It was a difficult lock, but she opened it after breaking only one pick. Then she went to the door.


She managed to disarm the trap, and once the door was open saw a long corridor leading into an open room that was overrun with rats. Scurrying frantically, searching for only rats know what, they ran here and there around the room at the end of the corridor. Mace and shield in hand, Bel moved forward until she was almost into the room.


The room was small, dank, dimly lit, and smelled badly. On the other side was an open doorway, and just to the left of it was another corridor which was very dimly lit, and had a closed door at its end. Starting to move forward, Bel suddenly detected movement near that far door... something much larger than the rats, and itself dark moved near the door.


Her heart beating a little faster, Bel switched to her bow. Now she was really glad she hadn't sold the imperial bow she had taken from that bandit back at the fort.


She knocked her arrow and pulled the string taut seeking to get a clear view of whatever that was by the door... there it was... she steadied her aim for a second, and loosed the arrow which flew straight and true to her target. With hardly a sound, it slumped down to the floor and lay still. Moving up to it, she could see that it was in fact just a singularly large skeever. Damn thing! She was sure it would have cost her a year off her life... if she hadn't been dead already.


Silently she opened the door, revealing another room. This room was very dark, but she could see there was a gate on the far side, and on the right, half way across, was a small fire with a cookpot. The floor seemed to be covered with bear traps, and... over by the gate there was a pile of hay back in the deep shadow, and there seemed to be someone sitting on it, slumped against the wall.


Bels breath hissed swiftly between her teeth as she heard Gian cry out "Somebody there?"


She readied her new spell, and quaffed her last potion of invisibility. On the far side of the room Gian leaped to his feet, and ran toward the door she now stood by. Bellowing with pain as he stepped in one of his own bear traps, he swung around with his fists raised, seeking a foe.


Bel moved away, and said in a loud whisper "Gian, I hold your Name in the palm of my hand, and the Fury of Hell has come upon you!"


With that she summoned her flame atronach, then silently turned and hurried out through the gate. Once out the gate, she turned in a crouch, pulled taut her bow and with smooth, deadly aim loosed her poisoned arrow.


Gian was already engulfed in flame from the atronach, but even so he felt the impact of the arrow and cried out for mercy as he dropped to his knees. There was no mercy to be had.


Bel's second arrow found his body just as the atronach cast a firebolt that exploded in bright flame carrying Gian's soul to hell. His body was thrown against the wall, then slumped to floor where he moved no more.


Wishing she had a torch, Bel drew her mace and moved forward to examine his body. She grabbed a few small items from his corpse and finally with a muttered "Nice gloves!" she moved away up the stairs that lay beyond the gate.



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Bel is now level 4

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 1:19 am

neil, great foray into the Ratway! I like Bel, she hasn't much choice but to do what a nasty situation forces from her, so my sympathies lie with her. :)

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 10:21 am

Serethil..... well not what I would choose for entertainment, but really it's just tiring... thankfully I'm not the manager dealing with the 4am start time to "reset" the store, I close, so will be placing the product. ( well except today...6am.. still sale stuff )



Neil... very descriptive, sound's like Bel is making the best of a bad situation.

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 4:23 am

Jensa’s Journal, pages 26 and 27



I‘m not sure whether to laugh or cry, Farkas is in the Windhelm jail because we beat up a pimp. I shouldn’t even bother to write this, but it was all my fault. Farkas is not one for trouble with the law. Or for letting some fetcher talk that way to a Shield-Sister.



At first I didn’t know why the guards weren’t hauling me off with him, but then one of them called me Stormblade. I should have known they’d know me, they’re all Stormcloaks.



I scooped up our gear and headed straight after them to the jail to talk Farkas free. When I got here the pimp was running his mouth about last night at the inn, saying I owe him a piece of my action. I tried to explain but everyone got it all wrong. The short version is it did not reflect well on my character. Still, they’re letting Farkas out without a record, which is all that matters.



Here he comes now. Oh, does he look mad. I’ll write more later if he doesn’t break my fingers.



~~~



Well, I didn’t think I could go so many days without speaking, but Farkas made me. Even when we fought critters on the road he told me what to do with a look. We got home and I couldn’t stand it anymore. I stopped him right on the steps of Jorrvaskr.



“What are you going to tell them?” I asked him.



“Huh?”



“About the thing in Windhelm. You know, when they all thought-- Are you going to say I’m worse than a Sanguine worshipper?” Then I remembered that party in the Misty Grove, but that didn’t slow down my mouth. “Go on and tell me first, so I’ll know.”



Farkas just looked at me.



“Are you still mad at me?” I had to ask. I sounded like such a whiner.



“Jensa, I don’t know what you’re talking about.”



Oh right, I thought. He’s a man. That wasn't the silent treatment, just a three day pause in the conversation. I had to give a big sniff and pretend I had something in my eye.



Farkas got an arm around me, weapons, packs, and all, and rubbed his knuckles on my head. “Just watch yourself, sister,” he told me. Then we went inside.



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Andra, your last two story posts brought that complicated Falkreath mood to life. Great updates!



Raging Ghost, I like the format of screenshot with a journal page from Leonde. Funny that Hadvar went bare-serker for the battle. I’m interested!



neildarkstar, Bel’s existence as a Fury looks like it will bring its own kind of torment. I am already fascinated by her story.



monkeyemoness, I love your drawings. Aza’s treatment of Meridia’s Beacon made me laugh. That damnable rock taught me not to be so reckless with the looting. Yikes, Aza is quietly terrifying. *shiver*



Lopov, I should know better than to read the Bloody Noble’s story before sleeping. That screaming head! :ahhh: Great update!



Serethil, Veri’s frustration came right through the screen, great update. The plan to leave Black with Skulvar so as not to strand him in Solitude should things go badly was a grim and admirable touch. I’m already cringing in anticipation of Veri’s reception from Malborn.

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 5:55 am

Grits.... very nice... Farkas is adorable , I never presume he is as dumb as others make him out to be, just thinks things through slowly. But I love the way you handled that.
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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:13 am

Heh. Grits, I figure one of these days, Jensa's going to wind up telling Farkas to "belt up" and then be totally surprised when he doesn't! Mr. Strong and Silent after all, if she wants talk, she should find Vilkas.... I had to laugh at the whole thing, the pimp, the jail.... but I think Jensa needs to have a calmer time soon, she's really having so much trouble.... Poor woman!



I really can only deal with the MQ in small bites....

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 4:53 pm

Grits..."a 3 day pause..." I almost choked! Loved this update, and just want to hug Jensa!

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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 4:07 pm

I hate missing posts, thanks Areial! I almost always find Valdr, and am always sad for him.



Ake...#67



We ended up just going straight to the city after leaving Valdr. Kerik wanted to send someone with a wagon to help the man with his dead, that they could be buried by their families and rest with kin. We went first to a trader's shop, whose proprietor he told me, was his friend Solaf. The man had lit up at seeing him, but after being told what had happened, he just let out a heavy sigh. "I'll send Bolund, they were his friends too, and he's got the wagon."


Kerik introduced me after that, and Solaf looked at me, his face hard. "Try to stea..." Kerik grabbed him by the shirt, pulling him halfway across the counter. "Don't say it. Great gods, it's a wonder you're still in business at all!" I backed up, Kerik looked ready to beat him. I looked from one to the other as Kerik glared, teeth clenched and his free hand in a fist, with Solaf glaring right back, both belligerent. "Fool, don't threaten my woman." Solaf's eyes widened, and then he looked at me with a sly smile. "His woman? Well, let me tell you, I'm much more handsome, as you can plainly see, and I own my own business...you could do much better than an itinerant smith with girls all over Skyrim. I'll spoil you...we could get married tomorrow." His blue eyes glittered, and his smile changed to a full on grin.



I couldn't help it, all I could do was gape in amazement. I looked at Kerik, who just barked out a laugh and shoved Solaf's head back with his palm. "Idiot." Solaf came around the counter and they clasped arms, both laughing while I still stared. "Good to see you back brother." Kerik slid his arm around my waist. "Don't stare, she's too smart for the likes of you, and she already has the best man around." "Maybe, but the only thing you know how to heat up is a forge." Their bantered insults went on, and I wanted to groan and laugh, I had no idea how to handle two crazy men, but Kerik helped me out then. "C'mon, let's go to the inn and get something to eat, we can look around after. Solaf smiled at me with a wink, waving as we went out. "I'll buy you a drink tonight after I close up, yeah?" Kerik nodded as we left, and I heard a snicker from inside as the door closed behind us.



"He's still as prickly as ever, the suspicious bastard. I wasn't joking, I can't believe he's still in business the way he treats customers. He had a thief once, and didn't know he'd been robbed until the man was long gone. Now he threatens everyone that comes in about what he'll do if they steal from him. The townsfolk are used to it, but I'm sure he loses good custom from travelers." He shook his head. "He was getting ready to spout the same to you before I stopped him. As if I would bring a thief into his shop." He snorted at that. "We've known each other for a long time, he's really a good man...underneath all the bluster." I laughed at both the affection and disgust in his voice.




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Post » Mon Apr 04, 2016 11:31 am

Grits, I had to laugh at the 3-day pause... it actually sounds familiar, and the whole thing was fun to read!

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