Isolation within. A Fallout fan faction.

Post » Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:38 am

((My first Fan Fiction, I'll try my best.))

"I'm left for dead." I muttered to myself, feeling the dust rise from the ground. I lay on the ground, motionless and confined. I stumbled as I got to my feet, before shortly falling back down. I remembered, they invaded my house, they slaughted my wife and took everything I had left away. The Enclave, the narcississtic self proclaimed goverment of America. Broadcasting Eden's progress with the so called great clensing of the Capital Wasteland. The final few days, we took our vows. I had served my duty with The Brotherhood of Steel, and I was finally free. I remember, kissing her with a passion like no other. Then a few days later, it.. it was all swept away. If I could start again, I could've changed everything. She was the most caring person you could've ever meet. Those ignorant pigs, they will soon realize what pain feels like. The Brotherhood of Steel will end their tyranny, and injustice to the Wasteland. I'm weak, I must rest.

17 HOURS LATER:
I woke up, and saw those yellow, selfish eyes glaze upon me. The Enclave found me, but I wasn't going to give them the last laugh. I reached for my Shotgun, and blew one of the troopers away. The other one drew his weapon, so I reacted without hesitation I slaughted him like I was a savage. Their was nothing left, I grabbed one of the troopers 10mm pistols. I then pointed it towards my brain, "I will finally feel the warmth of your face again Lisa, I wish their was some other way. Goodbye, Wasteland for you will no longer make me submit to the clutches that have destroyed others." I pulled the trigger, and ended what was a life of hope, but no will to live.

((I'd love to hear peoples opinions, I only discovered this board today. I could even make a prequel, with the characters backstory if you guys enjoy it. We'll have to see. It was short, I know but it was only a taster.))
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Channing
 
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Post » Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:33 pm

Steal isolation much >_>
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Jordan Fletcher
 
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Post » Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:49 am

Steal? ok, if I stole anything I'll change the name.
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Monika
 
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Post » Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:40 am

I was half-kidding.. I started a fanfic called Failed Isolation n u started Isolation Within

but it's chill idc
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Post » Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:02 pm

This is pretty good. I liked what you wrote, and it seemed like it could go somewhere. Definitely keep this going.
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Leah
 
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Post » Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:07 am

I could still make something out of this, I forgot about it.
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