My Dear Alice...

Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:47 pm

This holotape was found in Detroit, Michigan on July 20th, 2300
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DATE: December 14th, 2260
TO: Alice Bollan
FROM: Simon Silvan
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FZZZZT

Alright. Is it on? Good. Hi, Alice. Its me, Simon. I know, I know, your probably mad. I left again, with no explanation. Again. I had to though. This could make our fortune. We could finnally move out of that cruddy old shack in the Capital Wasteland, and come to some place nice, like Idaho! But trust me, I didnt wanna go. Right now me and Jack are in this bar somewhere in... Hey Jack, where are we?

(Unintelligable voices)

That's right, Michigan. Not sure what the city was called before the war. Detoriet, or something. But anyways, we had to come here. Some old guy hired us to play delivery boy. He wants some sort of computer chip thats around here. But anyways, we have no idea what we're looking for. Thats up to Ryan. You remember Ryan? He broke our door last year. Well, we havnt run into anything too bad so far. We found a couple of ghouls way back yonder. Nothin too hard.

(shouting from background)

Dammit, we gotta roll out. I'll send this to you as soon as I can. Love ya. I left some of my caps in the fridge for you.

FZZZZZT
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Its kinda short, but I didnt have time. Critisism?
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jasminε
 
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:34 pm

It seems good except for one thing.

The bombs didn't fall till 2077, this takes place in 2060.

?
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Reven Lord
 
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:35 pm

It seems good except for one thing.

The bombs didn't fall till 2077, this takes place in 2060.

?

Woops. Heh heh. Messed up a little. I fixed it though.
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:05 am

This Holotape was found outside of Detroit, Michigan in a nearby car factory on July 22nd, 2300

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DATE: December 17th, 2260
TO: Alice Bollan
FROM: Simon Silvan
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FZZZZZT

Hey Alice. Its Simon again. Right now me and the boys are looking for that chip I mentioned earlier. It isn't as easy of a job as I thought it would be. There are traps all over this place, and I think there is something living in here. Damn, I need a beer. It is so HOT in this place! Ugh, I'm not feeling so good. But, anyways, there are some weird people living in the villiage outside of here. They had a big totem in the middle of the place, and I think one of them stole my hat. But anyways, I-

(thud)

(Slightly distant voice of Simon) Oh, god! Grahh! Dammit! Jack, get me some Med-X! Agh!

(Silence, then the sound of Simon getting up)

Sorry about that. Med-X withdrawl. Like the ones I had back at home. Well, I gotta go. Sounds like Ryan has stumbled upon a room full of landmines and he needs me to disarm them. Love ya lots

FZZZT
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:46 am

Definitely a cool story but it really freaked me out when you started talking about Idaho until looked at the side and saw your location.
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:14 am

Definitely a cool story but it really freaked me out when you started talking about Idaho until looked at the side and saw your location.

:hehe:
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:30 pm

I've never been a huge fan of Holotape threads, but this one seems alright.

Hmm two more people from the ol' mid-west.
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:34 am

This Holotape was found outside of Detroit, Michigan in a nearby car factory on July 22nd, 2300
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DATE: December 17th, 2260
TO: Alice Bollan
FROM: Simon Silvan
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FZZZZT

Damn. I dont even know if this is going to get to you Alice. I hope it does. Oh my god, me and the guys are in some deep crap. Remember when I said that there were mines in this place? Well, Ryan decided to investigate. Only problom is he tripped and he made one of the mines blow up. His leg is in four different places in the room, and he's unconscious right now. But the roof exploded and now the northern exit is compleatly blocked off. We were on our way to the other door out when we heard voices. They didnt sound normal. We couldnt understand a word they said except for 'Infidels'. Then we heard something hit the door, and Jack tried to open the door. It didnt budge. Damn. So now were stuck in this room with what sounds like dangerous crazy people outside and-

(Distant voice of Jack) Alright Simon. I'm gonna try to shoot the door.

What Jack? Your crazy. Your insane as a matter of fact.

(Distant voice of Jack) What if we hit the thing blocking the door? It should move

And those weirdos will hear us and know that we're here

(Distant voice of Jack) Fine. Can I at least try to move some of the rubble in front of the northern door?

Sure. Now get moving. And toss me some Med-X. I'm starting to feel a little dizzy.

FZZZZT
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:01 am

I never new a man could get so addicted to med-x.

Ohh well keep them coming.
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:33 pm

I never new a man could get so addicted to med-x.

Ohh well keep them coming.


Med-X is actually Morphine. Bethesda had to change the name.

Yes, I'm that kind of nerd.
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:06 pm

This Holotape was found outside of Detroit, Michigan in a nearby car factory on July 22nd, 2300
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DATE: December 17th, 2260
TO: Alice Bollan
FROM: Simon Silvan
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FZZZZT

Whoever finds this, please bring it to Alice Bollan in the Capital Wasteland. Tell her that Simon is sorry. Listen, Alice, Jack is dead. Its horrible. I have no idea what happend to Ryan.

We were sitting in the room. Jack was trying to dig his way out and Ryan was still asleep. It was going well for about an hour, and then we started hearing the voices. They were all outside. Then the pounding came. They were slamming on the door. Jack was freaking out. By then they had busted a big hole in the door. I didnt look closley, but I could tell. They had wierd eyes. They were red. And I dont mean red like bloodshot eyes red. I mean they were actually red. Just, pure red. It freaked me out more than Jack I think. But Jack, he was compleatly insane. He grabbed my pistol out of my belt and fired twice. I guess we provocked them or something, because I saw a grenade. Jack didn't. He fired

Well, it was one hell of a shot. It hit the grenade and it made it change direction. It hit the pile of rubble, and exploded. Too bad Jack was still by it. My god, it was disgusting. He just... exploded. Its sick. But the door was clear. I grabbed Ryan and dragged him through. But I guess the grenade did more damage than we thought. The second we stepped out the door, the floor just broke. I dropped Ryan, no idea were he is. But its pitch black here. I cant see a thing. But I think that they're coming for me. So if I dont make it Alice.... I'm sorry.

FZZZZT
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:40 pm

This Holotape was found outside of Detroit, Michigan in a nearby car factory on July 22nd, 2300
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DATE: December 17th, 2260
TO: ???
FROM: Simon Silvan
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FZZZT

Listen, whoever finds this. You do not know what your getting into. This is bad. My name is Simon Silvan. Right now I'm waiting for the next wave of these.... freaks to come and get me. Me and two of my friends came here to get a computer chip for our boss. But I think that their both dead. These wierdo mutants keep coming in waves after me. You can't miss um. They're really skinny people with these damn red eyes. Ugh, one of them stuck a pole through my chest. I was pinned to the wall. Thats when I found the vent.

Listen, below the building is a large vent full of gas. If I could ignite the gas with something explosive, like, I dunno, a grenade, then the building would be completly destroyed. And hopefully the mutants. I'm going to try and get down there after the next wave. If I dont make it, that means that your listening to this holotape and you need to find a way to blow the hell out of this place. Alright, its been about five minutes and they havnt come. I'm going to run for it.

And if you ever meet Alice, tell her I love her.

FZZZT
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Last known recording of Simon Silvan.
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Alexx Peace
 
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:15 pm

So I take it he failed in destroying the "freaks". Seeing as there's still a car factory.
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:48 pm

So I take it he failed in destroying the "freaks". Seeing as there's still a car factory.

Yes.
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:19 am

Alright, last Holotape.
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This Holotape was found outside of Detroit, Michigan in a nearby car factory on July 22nd, 2300
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DATE: December 17th, 2260
TO:
FROM: Ryan Neidrich
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Listen. My name is Ryan Neidrich. I came here with my friends Simon Silvan and Jack Roalwer. We came here to get something, I cant remember what. But thats not important. I was unconscious, but I woke up a few minutes ago. Simon and Jack are dead. I saw what killed Jack, which was a grenade. Simon though.... he had plasma burns. Now, I've seen the freaks before. I saw them when they trapped us in the room. And they dont have weapons that can do that. I... I think someone else is in he-

(Plasma Rifle Shot)

(Power Armor masked Voice) Crap, that wasnt a freak.

(Other Voice) Damn. If the Lt. finds out...

(Power Armor Voice) Lets make sure he dosnt.

FZZZZT
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:46 pm

This was good! I like stories like these, as in diary form and you wrote it well. Good work :).
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:08 am

So what? The Enclave were cleaning up one of their exeriments that got loose.
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Post » Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:23 pm

So what? The Enclave were cleaning up one of their exeriments that got loose.

They were just pokin around. Walked into that building.
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