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» Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:42 am
C'mon, I wanna hear it.
I know I'm impatient, but I want feedback dammit.
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Jaylene Brower - Posts: 3347
- Joined: Tue Aug 15, 2006 12:24 pm
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:24 am
bumping=bad...
Friendly adice right there... Ohh about the writing.
I liked the scene where the general got cooked, violence humours me :ninja:
Friendly adice right there... Ohh about the writing.
I liked the scene where the general got cooked, violence humours me :ninja:
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Silencio - Posts: 3442
- Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:30 pm
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:05 pm
Here's some real friendly advice. Don't take advice from someone who can't spell advice correctly.
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. Little short though.
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. Little short though.
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Emily Rose - Posts: 3482
- Joined: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:56 pm
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:48 am
bumping=bad...
Friendly adice right there... Ohh about the writing.
I liked the scene where the general got cooked, violence humours me :ninja:
Friendly adice right there... Ohh about the writing.
I liked the scene where the general got cooked, violence humours me :ninja:
Hehe, I know. Bumping should be a floggable offense.
Here's some real friendly advice. Don't take advice from someone who can't spell advice correctly.
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. Little short though.
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. Little short though.
Just a prologue, so nothing too long on this one.
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Louise Lowe - Posts: 3262
- Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2006 9:08 am
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:59 am
I thought it was well written. I liked the flow of it, but it really was'nt my "Cup of tea" (I'm an Aussie), but it was good. keep it up, maybe it will get more interesting to me later?
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kitten maciver - Posts: 3472
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» Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:40 pm
I thought it was well written. I liked the flow of it, but it really was'nt my "Cup of tea" (I'm an Aussie), but it was good. keep it up, maybe it will get more interesting to me later?
Only if you like war and politics. :shrug:
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Cat - Posts: 3451
- Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 5:10 am
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:15 pm
Only if you like war and politics. :shrug:
Its not that I'm not interested in both war and politics, its just that it did'nt really catch me thats all. :shrug:
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adam holden - Posts: 3339
- Joined: Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:34 pm
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:48 pm
Its not that I'm not interested in both war and politics, its just that it did'nt really catch me thats all. :shrug:
Ah okay.
Well, guess you can't please everyone, eh?
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Neko Jenny - Posts: 3409
- Joined: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:29 am
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:00 pm
Here's some real friendly advice. Don't take advice from someone who can't spell advice correctly.
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. Little short though.
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. Little short though.
I hope that was sarcasm... <_<
Yeah i made a typo oops. Ca la vie.
And recently, they had lost contact with Anvil, when they were forced to abandon Kvatch because of a large Daedra presence in the west.
You started a scentence with and. I thought they said don't do that back in grade three.
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Quick Draw - Posts: 3423
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» Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:25 am
POST AFTER SUPPOSED LOCK
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Rachael Williams - Posts: 3373
- Joined: Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:43 pm
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:23 am
POST AFTER SUPPOSED LOCK
:rofl:
Hang on. Second request going through.
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Alexander Lee - Posts: 3481
- Joined: Sun Nov 04, 2007 9:30 pm
» Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:44 am
*insert jeoprody music*
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Rhysa Hughes - Posts: 3438
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» Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:53 am
Posts removed. I'm remaking this story 
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Reven Lord - Posts: 3452
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