The Mutated Ones

Post » Thu Nov 18, 2010 9:02 am

The year is 2297, almost one-hundred and fifty years have passed since Richard Grey was defeated in the Vault. The Children of the Cathedral scattered soon after. However, a historian has brought the Children of the Cathedral back together under a new name. The Mutated Ones. The cult is performing its duties oncemore. The Nightkin have been reassembled, and the historian or as they call him, "The Savior" has successfully began capturing and dipping humans into F.E.V. in Mariposa Military Base.

Where do you come in? You are various people who have decided to unite against The Mutated Ones for your own motives and reasons. You are starting off in the town of New Reno. The old families are dead, such as Wright, Bishop, Mordino, and Salvatore. Instead, one family rules over New Reno. The Smith Family. Are you doing this because of the Followers of the Apocalypse? For the reward from NCR? Whatever the reason, you have decided to unite against the Mutated Ones.

Rules

1. I am the leader of this, do not argue.

2. You can't steal from other roleplayers (without permission).

3. You can't kill other roleplayers (without permission).

4. You can't start out with energy weapons of any kind.

5. You can't start out with big gun weapons of any kind.

6. You can't charge into a group of Nightkin with a ten millimeter pistol and expect to survive.

7. Character sheets must be private-messaged to me for approval. If I approve, you may post them.

Character Sheet

Name:
Race (Human, Ghoul, or Super Mutant):
Gender:
Age:

Skin Color:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:

Class (class-name):
Class (Description of the class, what he excels at, what his weak points are)

Weapons (basic, conventional weapons, such as baseball bats and hunting rifles):
Armor (I will allow up to leather armor):
Medical (Stimpacks, Psycho, Jet, Med-X, etc.):
Literature (Books, journals, etc.)
Misc. (Favorite doll, pack of cigarettes, etc.)

Biography:
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christelle047
 
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Post » Thu Nov 18, 2010 2:59 pm

I think this may have been unsuccessful because it has a very vague concept; it doesn't seem like an exciting thing. What's the point of rebelling? Why haven't we just left? I honestly lost interest when Super Mutants were mentioned, it's a sort of unoriginal thing to have the plot revolve around Super Mutants. I personally think it is a :thumbsdown: to base it off of your own fanfic.
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Jani Eayon
 
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Post » Thu Nov 18, 2010 8:14 am

I think this may have been unsuccessful because it has a very vague concept; it doesn't seem like an exciting thing. What's the point of rebelling? Why haven't we just left? I honestly lost interest when Super Mutants were mentioned, it's a sort of unoriginal thing to have the plot revolve around Super Mutants. I personally think it is a :thumbsdown: to base it off of your own fanfic.


I gave a reference to my fanfic, but the main purpose isn't the same. And this isn't generic Vault 87 Super Mutant, these are the real Mariposa Super Mutants.

And please give some constructive criticism if you're going to criticize.
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Bethany Watkin
 
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Post » Thu Nov 18, 2010 11:11 am

I gave a reference to my fanfic, but the main purpose isn't the same. And this isn't generic Vault 87 Super Mutant, these are the real Mariposa Super Mutants.

And please give some constructive criticism if you're going to criticize.

I don't think it matters what kind of Super Mutants they are. And if it's in New Reno I think it's pretty obvious what kind of Super Mutants they are.

If you don't like what I gave you, oh well. You could easily do something with what I said. Take it or leave it.
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Andrew Tarango
 
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Post » Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:39 am

Close please.
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Susan
 
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