» Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:03 am His friend survived, and your writing is getting much better, I can't wait for more. 
EDIT: grammatical error, sry I was in a rush.
EDIT: grammatical error, sry I was in a rush.
Yep you going to learn alot more about what happen to his friend after the cave in. Thanks im glad people are reading and enjoying the story. I will add another chapter in soon!
