What if the Lone Wanderer never Existed?
What if the Enclave destroyed the Brotherhood?
What if the Enclave took control of D.C?
By year 2278, America was under the reign of the Enclave. Their prowess was far too much for the Brotherhood, and they were eliminated. Super Mutants were enslaved and forced to work for the Enclaves as brutes, while raiders and slavers were either captured and drafted, or killed off. Some fled D.C., the others who remained ran for the Museum of History, a.k.a. Underworld, where we still cower to this day. But the doors weren’t enough to keep them away, so we went underground, to the tunnels, were we were finally forgotten.
But where one danger subsided, another emerged. Once underground, we had to fend off the dangers of ferals, mutants, mirelurks, and even deathclaws.
While we were below, above the Enclave were making moves. They took siege of the White House, eradicating any mutant threat, and posted guards all around the city to make sure no threat was possible. As time passed, all other connections were destroyed, and more and more fled underground. They destroyed GNR, disabled all vaults. Megaton, Tenpenny Tower, Rivet City, were all swept through.
Now there are two sides. There are the Enclave, a massive beast that rules everything above ground, then there are the Damned, the group of derelict misfits, all too weak to name themselves the resistance. All they did was survive for scraps that we find, and attempt to defend ourselves from the terrors that also lurk in the dark, dank, underworld.
Then, something happened, one man rose from our little settlement and appointed himself leader. That same man was that man that single-handedly led us above ground, through D.C., and past it. Past the Pitt That man’s name was Calvin Cowell.
Now, the year is 2280, we now reside above ground in New York city. We have been accepted and welcomed by our fellow residents, and now I am proud to say that we have a Resistance. We call ourselves the Risen, and just like my father has saved us once, I plan to make sure he didn’t die for nothing. For I heard that the Enclave are headed up North, and when they get here, I will be ready.
How does that sound, or would it sound better as an RP?
It's a good stage setter; I think you could really do something with it. Although, I'm no expert in typed role-play, so IDK about that part.
Some fled D.C., the others who remained ran for the Museum of History, a.k.a. Underworld, where we still cower to this day. But the doors weren’t enough to keep them away, so we went underground, to the tunnels, were we were finally forgotten.
There's an accidental rhyme in those two lines...You may not care, but that kind of thing always bothers me. Just letting you know it's there.
While we were below, above the Enclave were making moves. They took siege of the White House, eradicating any mutant threat, and posted guards all around the city to make sure no threat was possible. As time passed, all other connections were destroyed, and more and more fled underground. They destroyed GNR, disabled all vaults. Megaton, Tenpenny Tower, Rivet City, were all swept through.
The wording here could be polished a bit. I would remove the first "and" from "...and more and more fled underground." just to have a better flow. It's all up to you, it being your creation, but that sounds a little smoother to me. (also, on a random creative note, you could say that Rivet City was sunk, and have that as a plot or setting element later). You could change "the others who remained" to "while others who remained", once again, just for flow.
Then, something happened, one man rose from our little settlement and appointed himself leader. That same man was that man that single-handedly led us above ground, through D.C., and past it. Past the Pitt That man’s name was Calvin Cowell.
This: "Then, something happened: One man rose up from our little settlement and appointed himself leader. That same man went on to single handedly lead us above ground, through D.C., and past it. Past the Pitt. That man's name was Calvin Cowell". Just syntax and punctuation suggestions.
For now, that's all I've got. You should keep going, IMO, this could lead into something awesome; I'll read the rest and give more feedback in time.