I just felt really bored and started writing an idea in my head a few days ago, I've rewritten a story about three times so far, So.. I hope you enjoy this story I guess.
I did'nt want to take up too much space about the characters in teh group, So I only named two characters so far.
But yeah, I hope you enjoy.




Chapter One: An Unwelcomed Awakening

It was a cold night, The wind was blowing and New Vegas was glowing like a match in complete darkness,
In the distance of the city were a group of men, But one of the men in the group was'nt moving,
He was on the ground... His eyes started to open and was numb,
He saw he was tied up and before he realized what was happening he looked up and as a gun pointed to him,
He started to remember his past...

*7:16 A.M., 81.09.16, One month prior*


It was a new day, A group of ten people were all travelling alongside each other,
Everyone was moving and passing the time by telling some jokes,
Some told stories of their past, but it was amazing that they lasted so long seeing only one of them had a weapon,
And it was an old 9MM pistol, but all that did'nt matter as they were all travelling to the same location,
The Mojave Desert, or more specifically New Vegas, A city said to have survived the Great War.


They all had been travelling for a week's time along a broken, worn road from the desert heat and it's age,
At least three were going to break off from the main group to head to a small town around New Vegas called Primm,
They were heading there to resupply and look for permanant employment, as they were heading down the road,
One of the people in the group was a former slave, Was named Mary and she asked "Whats so great about New Vegas?"
to which the leader of the group who was named Richard replied "What IS'NT great about Vegas? It has casino's, Electricity, and many job opportunities."

While they were marching down the battered road,
A group of four bandits appeared and all were equiped with weapons and the leader of this group
demanded that they "Give us your supplies! Now!", Richard complied and brought the bag of supplies towards the bandit leader,
But what the Bandit did'nt know is that Richard held the pistol behind the bag, As the Bandit reached for the bag Richard pulled the trigger
and shot through the bag, it hit the Bandit in the arm and wounded him, and it all went down hill after this...


to be continued...

I don't have a lot to say, I'm pretty tired. But I got to say it kinda of reads like a police report. As in you just state stuff plain and simple, if makes the experience a little bit dull. Maybe adding...more "emotion", does that make sense?

Anyway, I like the layout, only seen one other person do it like that.

Yeah, I did'nt go into too much detail as I am pretty tired and just wrote this in like ten minutes.

I'll try and edit things in after the Eclipse tonight.

Also, May I ask who else has used this layout?

No problem man, I understand. I've seen you post before and so I had high expectations. I know you can do better, anyway here's the link to his first and I think only completed fan fic. http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?showtopic=969529

That means alot coming from you man, But yeah, I'm too tired to write a better story right now.

Yttrium is correct Boradam. But I'm not gonna rag on ya, I saw the lunar eclipse too. You can do better, try to spend a couple hours on it atleast and you'll see the difference.

I almost saw the eclipse but it was WAAAY too cloudy, But yeah i'll try to work on it today.