Prologue

The Germans built Vaults, also fearing a Nuclear Exchange. But unlike the US Vaults, they were built to Public expectation, in other words, no experiments, no mutant making, no social tests. But those bunkers were meant to never open. But not everyone got in in time. One group of people, which was about 600, set up in a Church in Frankfurt, which was barely hit by Nuclear Warheads. But there were constant raiders. Soon, the English had conquered most of Europe, Frankfurt was still a warzone, the Church, battered by hundreds of years of warfare, would be put to the test.

Chapter One-For the Fatherland

The Garrison of the Frankfurters, as they called themselves, held their ground, they saw another Raider group, probably hell bent on taking something from the church

Animals.... Thought Rudolf Steiner, the Garrison squad 2 commandant

Guns opened out from the windows of the fairly large Church, ripping the raiders apart limb from limb

"HAHAHAHA!" Laughed Adolf Duckwtiz, the squad 2 MG gunner, he was a fairly......enthusiastic person when it came to killing raiders.

You really need to write more than this, this is way too short to even give an opinion.

Okay, ive been a little tight working on this, it's hard just trying to make Character's names without being "Political" or get spammed by

"YOU HAZ COD REFERENCE!"

I seriously doubt that would ever happen on here, and if names are troubling you, just use some kind of random name generator, their not that important.

I'm going to have to say, write more in one chapter. That Chapter could be just the first paragraph out of five, seven, nine. Though there is enough here for me to offer a detailed criticism, I won't until you make chapter one longer, simply because I like to read at least a half page of material.

As it stands right now, there is not nearly enough material here. It didn't take me more than 10 seconds to read that over, and I need a bit more than that. There is definitely potential in this, though.

Deutschland, Deutschland uber alles! Now you got my humming the anthem. Anywho, I like it, but it was short, and should be at least one or two paragraphs long.

Just for the record: "Deutschland, Deutschland über alles,..." is from the first verse of von Fallersleben's Das Lied der Deutschen and is not part of the current national anthem.

Chapter Two-You tell em' Ferret Face!

Soon, the English advanced more and more, they took Saarbrücken without fault, the town gave in under the Autocracy that was the English "Republic"

"Did you hear Adolf?" Asked Roland Hammerstein, the church steeple leader asked Adolf Duckwitz

"Heard from who, and more like what?" he replied

"Berlin Radio reported it this morning, Those damned English just took Saarbrücken, they said it could be hours before the first english wave." he said

"[censored]! We need to have everyone at defensive positions at the Church, get all weapons and supplies, we need barricades and heavy weapons!" Said Adolf
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As the Second Infantry rolled through Saarbrücken in jeeps, they set their sights on Frankfurt Am Main

"Sir! Command wants us to assault Frankfurt Am Main!" Said Private Walter "Radar" O'Reilly

"PUSH FORWARD! WE NEED TO GET TO THE AIR-BASE!" said the Commander, who was referring to the drop zone the British had set up for the assault on Frankfurt

After an hour of prepping, they got into choppers, drop-planes, and pilots got into bombers and fighter-bombers. They were prepared to raze Frankfurt if needed.

"ONE HOUR UNTIL DROP!" Yelled Major Frank "Ferret Face" Burns

"You tell em' ferret face!" Joked Private O'Reilly