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Nice, makes it more clearer, but i have two questions:
What are the "unoccupied" zones? (who controls them, military, government etc etc"
This is more of a suggestion:
What about having Camp Guardian a NCR outpost, kinda like a "Alamo" with them surrounded in all directions by Amphibious Legionaries and Mohave Union troops?