Shadowblade: Oblivion Machinima

Post » Sat May 28, 2011 1:21 pm

Hi,

I just finnished my new machinima Shadowblade, and i would be really greatfull if i could get some feedback on it, if its worth continuing or not! here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-72uI1EbYzw

Description:
They say, if you make a pact with the Shadow lord to save someone you love. The person will be bound to do his bidding and if you would fail the entire world will suffer for the mistake.

The ability to summon the shadow lord is a powerful magic, and only the ones with the most pure heart can do it.

But if a pact is made, the pure heart will be taken over by the Shadow itself, and be doomed for all eternity.

Recently this pact was made, and now this man suffers the title of:

SHADOWBLADE

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This is a Short machinima i made just to test my skills, please give me feedback if this is somthing worth continuing or if it should be left un touched!
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gemma king
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 5:53 am

Cool, was well made with fitting music etc.

i think you should carry on see where you get :)
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Unstoppable Judge
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 6:35 am

I watched it. It's not bad, you obviously put effort into making it. But I'm afraid it didn't really grab my interest. There is not much of a story and the video itself is pretty static (most people are just standing wherever they are). It's okay, but it's not really good.

I'm sorry I can't be more encouraging, but that's my honest opinion.
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Amy Melissa
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 7:45 am

I watched it. It's not bad, you obviously put effort into making it. But I'm afraid it didn't really grab my interest. There is not much of a story and the video itself is pretty static (most people are just standing wherever they are). It's okay, but it's not really good.

I'm sorry I can't be more encouraging, but that's my honest opinion.


Thats true that its pretty static, and its not much story either, the point was more just to test of my skills, and making a dynamic machinima in oblivon isent to easy,
you have an image in your head, but it never comes out exactly as you want it, but I respect the feedback! ;)
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Alyesha Neufeld
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 9:00 am

Awesome video Congratulations!
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