Nerevar's Tale

» Fri May 27, 2011 1:15 am

Nerevar's Tale is a story I'm writing, I've written alot of stories over the years, and I've decided to begin one about morrowind, atm I have 4 chapters. I'll be hosting the story http://www.freewebs.com/starmodding/storynerevarstale.htm. I thought I'd let you guys know, one thing though: don't say 'there's a spelling mistake! I hate you' I know there are errors in there, I will try to fix them when I see them. I'm not perfect either .
Hope you all enjoy it!

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 12:54 am

» Fri May 27, 2011 12:31 pm

.......................... one thing though: don't say 'there's a spelling mistake! I hate you' I know there are errors in there, I will try to fix them when I see them. I'm not perfect either .
Hope you all enjoy it!

-Star

Won't happen on "my watch". Constructive criticism only here.

» Fri May 27, 2011 6:19 am

It would be easier for people to review your story if you just posted the chapters here. :shrug: It's your choice of course.

I understand, but people may have noticed I'm not online too much anymore, due to RL things I've been quite busy, so I don't really have time for these boards unfortunatly

-Star

edit: feel free to post reactions here though, but I won't be able to check it regularly, as for my site, I can.

» Fri May 27, 2011 9:20 am

Won't happen on "my watch". Constructive criticism only here.

heh, thanks Ro

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 7:57 am

I understand, but people may have noticed I'm not online too much anymore, due to RL things I've been quite busy, so I don't really have time for these boards unfortunatly

-Star

Ah, well that explains your reasoning then. I can't promise that I'll look at it, but I will if I find the time or want.

» Fri May 27, 2011 12:53 pm

Ah, well that explains your reasoning then. I can't promise that I'll look at it, but I will if I find the time or want.

Hope you do

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 2:45 am

Hope you do

-Star

Just by glancing at it I have two things to say. One, there's no reason to call the prologue "Chapter 0", because a prologue isn't a chapter. Two, your chapters are just big blocks of text. BREAK IT UP, PLEASE! It's awfully too hard to read because you don't have any spacing whatsoever. It would be in your best interest to change that.

» Fri May 27, 2011 2:39 am

» Fri May 27, 2011 12:07 pm

Wow, very interesting, and very good, this is a good story...

you ever think of writing a book?

Thank you very much
writing a book is a little over my head I think though
maybe when I'm older...
We'll see

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 5:31 am

» Fri May 27, 2011 2:47 am

Just by glancing at it I have two things to say. One, there's no reason to call the prologue "Chapter 0", because a prologue isn't a chapter. Two, your chapters are just big blocks of text. BREAK IT UP, PLEASE! It's awfully too hard to read because you don't have any spacing whatsoever. It would be in your best interest to change that.

Even if I wanted to name the prologue 'chapter puprleelephant' I would do so
Normally the text should be somewhat more structured then it is now, It's proboably because of the updates on freewebs it glitched out, I'll check it out.

That's pretty good, I like the first chapters. Although I thought it was strange a spymaster undercover (I guess "the addict" is his cover?) would sent you on a non-covert mission and blatantly put you need to go somewhere and ask someone for notes rather than secretly get it. Walls have ears you know.
The personalea could be more thought-over imo.

thanks
and about Caius, yes I am planning on doing a personal sketch of him in the story; somewhere about chapter 7/8 I think. He's a blade after all, he doesn't reveal who he is to just a mere stranger in my story!

I just wanted to say that chapter 5 is uploaded and readable

-Star

» Thu May 26, 2011 11:58 pm

» Fri May 27, 2011 7:39 am

A stroke of inspiration hitted me, and Chapter 6 is on

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 3:28 am

» Fri May 27, 2011 1:13 pm

» Fri May 27, 2011 10:08 am

I glimpsed over it. Your writing is decent but there is nothing new about this story. The events are all from the game - how can I learn something new?

You will have to stick with me The story is getting it's turn about chapter 10!
I'm only at Chapter 6 right now. I have to build up a solid base (by using game quests) before I can make stuff happen

That's the problem with doing quest-fics. They're awfully hard to pull off and make interesting. I've only seen a few turn out halfway decent.

indeed, but as I said, I'm building a base, and I have alot of great ideas! but the problem is I have to build the base first

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 1:50 pm

Chapter 8 is up guys, it's quite long 1427 word te be exact, my fingers hurt
hope you all like it!

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 11:25 am

» Fri May 27, 2011 3:48 pm

Ehh...

It's alright. I feel like I'm playing one of my characters through the game. It get's alittle old and battered after three consecutive years of hardcoe Morrowind gaming...

The last chapter is finally getting to where I want to get, I had to use the MQ as a walking stick to build up, but I think I'm at a point where I'm able to give the story the spin I wanted it to give . I've been quite busy the last week, but I'm writing the next chapter now! So don't worry, I'm not dead yet

-Star

» Fri May 27, 2011 12:21 am