first off James is my character secondly this is an attempt i want honesty about this

James just walked out of the arena when he got knocked into by a little yellow haired elf "BY AZURA BY AZURA BY AZURA! you're the grand champion!"
"Um....Yes i am?" James said glaring at the really devoted fan
"Can I...Can i have your autograph" the really devoted fan said
"Will you leave me alone?" James said obviously irritated because he usally had some stupid princess who got stuck in a tower by a couple of goblins
"Yes yes yes!!" the really devoted fan said
James signed a card the really devoted fan sprinted off glee in his screams, James then set off and stayed at an inn and was awoken in the middle of a night by heaving breaths right over him
"BY AZURA BY AZURA BY AZURA! you're the grand champion!" said the really devoted fan
"WHAT DO YOU WANT!" said James tiredly
"I wanna be like you!" said the really devoted fan eagerly "Please Please Please!"
"Ok, ok, ok! You go and wipe out the city of anvil and bring me the prophets head and the countesses head, leave no one alive"said james and the really devoted fan ran off eagerly "He'll be dead and ill be at peace finally"
a week later James had felt bad about sending the Fan on a death run but that quickly passed when he walked into his little shack by the waterway in the city seeing the little fan in anvil guard clothes holding 2 heads
"Dead....Dead...the cities.......dead"the fan said out of breath James scream and stepped back unsheathing his blade
"You are twisted Fan, but the deed is done" James looked scared and afraid to sleep
"Do...i get a cool name Mr. Grandchampion" the fan said eagerly dropping the heads as they fell with a thud
"Uh sure kneel" and the fan did"Arise......Darth....Steve" and the fan stood up
"What is my next mission my master" said the fan
"GO Jump off a cliff" and the fan sprinted away quickly and James didnt see him for a month, the fan of course came back but he was wearing Daedric armor"Um Steve what happened"
"I fell into a portal to hell and they told me to fest on you" and he charged at James and James ran for it crying for the guard but the guards saw nothing so they paid no attention
To this day James sits in that cell claiming theres someone after him screaming "BY AZURA BY AZURA BY AZURA! you're the grand champion!""....

My honest opinion is that this story is not in accordance with the TES style.

what do you want me to add
thous and hitheR?

Have you seen any thous and hithers in TES games?

I would say less "Darth", less "Azura", less "Fanchild" to begin with.

Arise.....Darth....... Steve. Lol. The funnies line in the story.