My Fallout Movie Idea

Post » Fri May 13, 2011 10:03 am

I still don't like the fairy tale style ending. But you seem to really want it.
Other than that it seems alright, but it could be boring seeing as everything is going in one, preset line: Someone looking for something and encounters dangers along the way. Until they finally get to the predictable end.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:12 am

I still don't like the fairy tale style ending. But you seem to really want it.
Other than that it seems alright, but it could be boring seeing as everything is going in one, preset line: Someone looking for something and encounters dangers along the way. Until they finally get to the predictable end.


it bounces around in time. Also the happy ending won't be obvious. It is to us since everything is spelled out. But I want the feeling that this is a suicide mission or even perhaps that his love is dead or the utopia could be a lie. While watching it, you wouldn't know if the rumors are true or not, plus people keep giving slightly different info on it. Whether its real or not is the big mystery.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 11:56 am

Awesome! Thats much more original and interesting!
But there should still be a climix before the ending. Like him finding something of her's and believe she is dead.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:56 am

Awesome! Thats much more original and interesting!
But there should still be a climix before the ending. Like him finding something of her's and believe she is dead.


I was thinking he gets attacked and overwhelmed near the end, and almost dies, but perhaps some Enclave or BoS come in and save him. Making the time its taken him to get to her even longer and causing the fear of her or him being dead even greater.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 8:29 am

I was thinking he gets attacked and overwhelmed near the end, and almost dies, but perhaps some Enclave or BoS come in and save him. Making the time its taken him to get to her even longer and causing the fear of her or him being dead even greater.


Or (seeing as you were talking about him being saved by someone) he saves someone, like a little girl, who is obsessed with the utopia idea too. So she eventually leads him there.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 2:55 pm

Or (seeing as you were talking about him being saved by someone) he saves someone, like a little girl, who is obsessed with the utopia idea too. So she eventually leads him there.


i do like that!
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Laura Tempel
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 12:11 pm

i do like that!


Ya, one of the things I've figured out is that long interludes away from the main story are boring. To write anyway... I mean unless you're planning on making an entire season out of it... I mean movie....
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Sasha Brown
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 12:18 pm

I mean unless you're planning on making an entire season out of it... I mean movie....



huh?
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Mariana
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:54 pm

huh?


Nothing <.< >_>
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 10:36 am

Nothing <.< >_>


so are you interested in helping me write it?
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Vickey Martinez
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:45 am

so are you interested in helping me write it?


Sure, I've been trying to be more interactive recently.
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Stephanie Valentine
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:39 am

Sure, I've been trying to be more interactive recently.



Awesome. How do you wanna do it? on here? through PM or wanna meet up and write?
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:57 am

I guess PM me when you have a rough draft and I'll send you some of my ideas
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 9:57 am

Good deal.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 3:18 pm

Ideas good, adn Galens idea is good, but reminds me of that disgusting thing MZ.

BUt all in all nice, got kind of a cheesy fairttale ending, but :thumbsup:
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:19 pm

Ideas good, adn Galens idea is good, but reminds me of that disgusting thing MZ.


MZ?
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 8:59 am

MZ?

mothership zeta, sir
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 12:56 pm

How is this like MZ at all? And I kind of liked Aliens in Fallout a little.
Aliens in Silent Hill, however. I do not like that.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:09 pm

How is this like MZ at all? And I kind of liked Aliens in Fallout a little.
Aliens in Silent Hill, however. I do not like that.


With the idea of the child helping him, that is really the only reason. But any reason that reminds me of MZ is bad.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:58 pm

With the idea of the child helping him, that is really the only reason. But any reason that reminds me of MZ is bad.


So you hate children, eh?
Free the dreams!
JFK!
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:20 am

i have a friend coming into town and we are going to work on the story this weekend.
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