The Trials and Sorts of Two-Face Ojenjii

Post » Tue May 17, 2011 10:18 am

A scarey night in Direnni Tower!

Nicely done. I enjoyed Ania's thought process.
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Madison Poo
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:43 pm

I am glad we were succesful in persuading you to continue :)

Might I suggest a small edit here:
..it suddenly donned on her..
Maybe: ".. it suddenly dawned to her.."?
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Tai Scott
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 11:01 am

Noted! And thank's for the support guys. Progress on this story will probably be a bit slower than usual.
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Franko AlVarado
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 11:11 am

I've been lurking here, reading as you've been posting.

It's been good - I liked the settings and the characters.

Go as slow or as fast as you like, just keep 'em good!
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