Question 1: Well, you will have to wait and see, what doesn't come in this story will sure come in future ones.

Question 2: I hope for it to be long, originally I had planned for it to be ten chapters but now I see it should be longer.

Criticism: English is my native language, and I try my best to spell things right. If what you see is wrong, it is most likely a character's name, which it shouldn't be. If you could provide and example of what you mean I will gladly take a look at it.

Glad you like it!

I forget what I saw wrong, and you've probably edited it out by now. Thanks for the reply!