Queen of The Pitt

Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:47 am

id rather see her talk with the lone wander before the stories over

oh that will definitely happen. But a downer ending would be the lone wanderer blowing her brains out after smashing her face into the wall, breaking her hands, cutting off her legs, and kicking her in the stomach.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:45 am

Oooh this is getting really good! Please post more, but if you can't, whatever. I think you should make the Lone Wanderer show up and save her. By the way, I hope she doesn't actually MIRV the Citadel cause'...Sarah Lyons is in there...
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:55 pm

holy (censored) lorca...were you just BORN this awesome?
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:31 pm

id rather see her talk with the lone wander before the stories over


It'll happen.....but as Darth said there are a multitude of ways that confrontation could play out.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 8:26 am

Great stuff
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 10:55 am

I wonder if her immunity extends to being dipped.......
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:11 pm

I wonder if her immunity extends to being dipped.......

Would be interesting to see. It would also be interesting to see if Marie's DNA could stunt human evolution, or if her immunity could be disabled with a retrovirus.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 3:07 pm

Caught up. Guess the district might be buddies of eastern Lyons Bos, but they coud have taken it. Since they may come into play she might learn abit about her father here or there. But I'm more interested in the MIND(nice acronym). I feel this is more than just some horde making killer (could it also be a plot device!).

Also don't think Gorski would just hand over a MIRV to little Miss Pitt. "Hey I barely know you, but I see something in you, something that screams I can trust you with a city block killing launcher, here ya'go, I hope due to my generosity you won't level my camp to the ground!"

Much less a young teen(forget the age) carrying a 150 pound weapon. This better be a light stealth version of the weapon but I doubt they have such models. I was expecting he'd lend a decent sniper or something.( An awesome beam rifle) Would be something she could find among the district if she gets there.


Also i hope future energy wepons won't be the Godly plasma rifle she has right now. Nano tech, not sure they had that in FO prewar.


Sorry for being too critical.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 11:39 am

Caught up. Guess the district might be buddies of eastern Lyons Bos, but they coud have taken it. Since they may come into play she might learn abit about her father here or there. But I'm more interested in the MIND(nice acronym). I feel this is more than just some horde making killer (could it also be a plot device!).

Also don't think Gorski would just hand over a MIRV to little Miss Pitt. "Hey I barely know you, but I see something in you, something that screams I can trust you with a city block killing launcher, here ya'go, I hope due to my generosity you won't level my camp to the ground!"

Much less a young teen(forget the age) carrying a 150 pound weapon. This better be a light stealth version of the weapon but I doubt they have such models. I was expecting he'd lend a decent sniper or something.( An awesome beam rifle) Would be something she could find among the district if she gets there.


Also i hope future energy wepons won't be the Godly plasma rifle she has right now. Nano tech, not sure they had that in FO prewar.


Sorry for being too critical.


I understand your point...and if I were Gorski I would be reluctant to hand over the single most devastating man-portable weapon extant over to a stranger I met once for a few minutes and send her on a mission of critical importance to my faction....butwhen you're a hero, on Marie's case a heroine, a trusting face is one of the perquisites for the job because total strangers line up to entrust thier lives and fortunes to you. :lol: I have theories but I'd prefer to keep silent about them and see where Lorca is taking this.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 9:19 am


Also don't think Gorski would just hand over a MIRV to little Miss Pitt. "Hey I barely know you, but I see something in you, something that screams I can trust you with a city block killing launcher, here ya'go, I hope due to my generosity you won't level my camp to the ground!"

Much less a young teen(forget the age) carrying a 150 pound weapon. This better be a light stealth version of the weapon but I doubt they have such models. I was expecting he'd lend a decent sniper or something.( An awesome beam rifle) Would be something she could find among the district if she gets there.

to be fair, there's nothing to indicate the MIRV weighs 150 pounds. In-game, it takes up 30 units in the carry-limit, but the carry limit also isn't very grounded in reality.

What I really want to know is how They got their hands on the MIRV in the first place. Was this a case of there being a second MIRV in Virginia? Or did they somehow steal it from the District?
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:00 pm

What I really want to know is how They got their hands on the MIRV in the first place. Was this a case of there being a second MIRV in Virginia? Or did they somehow steal it from the District?

Oh its 30 pounds, man I thought it was 150 for some reason......yeah just forget that part. I should stay up on my in-game fallout items.

But yeah 30 pounds not a big deal, any average person could carry that but she still does have a plasma rifle and I bet somewhat heavy body armor to carry+ supplies, so now I can see the strain instead of just not being outright not carry it.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:58 am

What I really want to know is how They got their hands on the MIRV in the first place. Was this a case of there being a second MIRV in Virginia? Or did they somehow steal it from the District?


Gorski said they took it off the corpse of a BOS scout that was trying to infiltrate thier lines.....methinks Paladin Hoss lifted it from the LW's house in Megaton and just ran away in the wrong direction. ;)
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 4:26 pm

Gorski said they took it off the corpse of a BOS scout that was trying to infiltrate thier lines.....methinks Paladin Hoss lifted it from the LW's house in Megaton and just ran away in the wrong direction. ;)

Must have missed that. I bet the LW was pissed when he found out his subordinate died and got his cool toy captured by the enemy.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:36 pm

Update time...

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Chapter 11: Heart of Darkness

The mutant's breath stunk, a combination of rotting meat the coppery scent of encrusted blood. Every inch of Marie's body ached, a sharp pain stabbing at her side, the small of her back stinging, wires digging into her wrists. In panic, she realised that the weight of the M.I.R.V. and the pvssyr of her plasma rifle were absent, her radio smashed into useless fragments, lost in the chaos of battle. Frantically scanning the area, she noticed that her combat knife was still attached to her boot. As day turned to night, she silently watched the Super Mutants, listening and waiting. When the beasts had lumbered out of earshot, she attempted to whisper to the injured Carr, but received no response.

Caged in the shadows, she rubbed the wires of her restraints against the serrated edge of her combat knife, grimacing as the blade sliced against her forearms. The pain took her back to her childhood, when the clumsy slaves would slice at her for tissue samples. Then as now she remained resolute, steeling herself against the pain. After much trial and error, the bonds slipped off her wrists as the sun began to rise. Exhausted, Marie had no idea how she would now escape her cage and captors, but breaking her bonds was a step on the path to freedom.

Trying to formulate an escape plan, she found that she could no longer fight her tiredness, drifting into a dreamless sleep. She was awoken abruptly by gunshots. Blinking in the light, she caught sight of one of her Super Mutant captors falling into the dust, while the other charged out of sight with a nailboard held aloft. Another gunshot and a loud thud followed. Two human figures appeared, clad in leather armour. They approached the cages, kicking them open.

"One dead, one alive," said one of the figures to the other.

The other, larger figure approached, spitting on the ground as he spoke. "Shame. But this one'll make a good raider [censored]. About 200 dollars...300 if we're lucky."

He grabbed Marie, dragging her out of the cage and throwing her into the dirt. "Move, meat," he grunted, jabbing a shotgun into her back. Marie flinched, as she struggled to stand. She fell to her knees, to the annoyance of her new captor. "Up!" he shouted, kneeling down to grab her. As he did, Marie span around, sinking her combat knife into the side of his neck. She yanked the blade forward, slicing through the windpipe. The slaver gurgled blood, spraying it over Marie's delicate face. The other figure yelled, opening fire with his pistol. The bullets slammed into the mass of meat now sheltering Marie, as she quickly grabbed the shotgun from the dirt. The firing ceased as her enemy stopped to reload, prompting her to shove the human shield aside. She took aim carefully as the slaver loaded a new magazine. She squeezed the trigger, sending both of them sprawling. The slaver let out a groan as he lay in the dirt.

Marie remained motionless for some time, struggling to regain her strength. Fumbling in her pockets, she found the last of her medical supplies, one StimPak, a dose of MedX and a syrette of the cure. She jabbed the StimPak into her shoulder, scrabbling to her feet. Tossing it aside, she reached for the MedX, shakily injecting it into her arm, finding a vein out of pure luck. The pain gradually subsided, as she wiped the blood off her face, leaving red streaks across her pale features. Staggering over to the slaver, she picked up his pistol. Rifling through his pockets she found a few banknotes and a dose of Jet, as well as another magazine of ammunition for the 10mm pistol. The other had a few shotgun shells on him, but nothing else of interest.

Rapidly tiring of the ruined compound, she headed for the only exit. Feeling a tremendous rush of energy, from the MedX or freedom she did not now, she surveyed her surroundings. The mutants had carried her far into the depths of a city, but a city like no other. Unlike her own Pittsburgh, this city had been almost entirely reduced to piles of rubble and decayed buildings, but what drew Marie's eye was a colour she had not seen before, at least in this context. Green. Blades of grass poked through the cracked pavement, tree saplings reached towards the sun. Towards the south she spotted a great dome and obelisk, dominating the skyline. Reloading her newfound shotgun, she threw caution to the wind and began to trudge towards the landmark. She passed a wall tagged with the letters 'M' and 'H' encircled, beneath which was scrawled the message 'ZEN IS REAL'. Puzzled, she continued down the street, taking in the grand sights of the city, fallen statues and grand fa?ades.

Moving closer to the obelisk, she began to feel drowsy. Yawning aloud, she tasted blood in her mouth. Alarmed, she began to spit. Touching her face, she realised her nose was running, mixing with the blood of the slain slaver. She spat once more in disgust, her drowsiness becoming more and more noticeable. Although she could not remember falling asleep, she awoke to the view of a cracked ceiling and a rather musty smell.

"She's awake," reported a gravely female voice.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:24 pm

Underworld......interesting. :lol:
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:43 am

Nice chapter can't wait for the next.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:06 am

Been too long without an update. Time to continue Marie's journey...

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Marie struggled to sit up, a jolt of pain forcing her back down.

"Don't try to get up. You're still in pretty bad shape," the raspy voice responded. "Two broken ribs, concussion, multiple contusions, lacerations, second degree burns to your back along with dehydration and malnutrition...good job you were brought in when you were."

"What...where am I? Who brought me in here?"

"You're in Underworld. A city of ghouls. One of our patrols picked you up near the National Archives, not far from here. I'm Doctor Barrows. You've been recovering here for four days."

"Four days?"

"Sedated and on a drip for your malnutrition."

"I...can't remember what I was doing...The District! I need to find the Lone Wanderer!"

"Ah, our fellow ghoul. Why are you looking him?"

Marie thought for a moment, choosing her words carefully. "He's has the answers to some important questions. Wait...did you say he was a ghoul?"

"An honorary ghoul of Underworld, yes. I'm afraid you won't be going anywhere for a little while. There is one thing that intrigues me...your rate of healing has been quite remarkable. For a wastelander, you show no signs of mutation at all..."

"Oh...I am rather unique, as far as wastelanders go," replied Marie.

"That much is obvious. It's extraordinary, and could have extraordinary implications for my people and our allies."

"Implications? Your allies? Slow down, doctor."

"I have been researching the ghoul condition for thirty years, attempting to find a cure for our rotting form. So far, I've met without success. With your unique condition, I think a breakthrough is imminent for ghouls and meta humans alike."

"Meta humans? What are you talking about?"

"You'd probably call them Super Mutants. But they aren't all lumbering brutes, devoid of intelligence. Ten years ago a pair of them founded a settlement and a philosophy, to reclaim what was taken from them. They called it Zen."

"You...think I could cure ghouls and Super Mutants?"

"I don't know. But if your resistance to mutation could be harnessed and transferred...it's possible."

"In my hometown, The Pitt, mutants called Trogs used to be a constant menace. But the people there found a way to immunise the women against the condition."

"Women eh?" Doctor Barrows thought for a moment. "Ah. Genetics. But you never tried this on anyone already affected by the condition?"

Marie shrugged. "We couldn't exactly ask them politely. I think I recall Nola saying that it would fail, though...even the cure wasn't potent enough to reverse the effect once it had taken hold."

"Hmm...a number of problems, then. We'll talk more later."

With that, the doctor upped Marie's sedatives, sending her into a gentle unconsciousness. When she awoke, the pain had subsided somewhat. She blinked into the light, sitting up on the bed.

"Ah, you're awake. Listen, Nurse Graves and I have been discussing your unique situation and how it fits into our own research. We don't have the facilities here to make any real progress. We'll need to take a trip, and take a leap of faith."

"Leap of faith? I don't like the sound of that."

"For us, not you," replied Barrows. "We will need to contact the Brotherhood of Steel."

Marie's eyes lit up. "The Brotherhood? Isn't that where the Lone Wanderer is?"

"He certainly is."

"Then what's the problem? Isn't he an honorary ghoul, your friend?"

"He is. His friends aren't. I don't know how things work in The Pitt, but the politics of The District can be complex, and deadly."

"Deadly? What do you mean?"

"We don't fit in with the sanitised settlements of The District, or their testosterone-fuelled Brotherhood allies. They also strongly disapprove of our ties with Zen."

"You mean you're not part of The District?"

"Nope. The District is more of a loose alliance of settlements, one Underworld and Zen aren't part of. Rivet City, Megaton, 101, Canterbury Commons, Big Town, MacCready Tower. And their Brotherhood allies, they're The District. Not much room for mutants."

"It seems some things don't change, no matter where you go."

"Indeed. But if my research is to come to fruition, we need to contact them as a matter of necessity."

"So, you and me are heading to The Citadel, their HQ?"

"Me? No, that isn't wise. I'm needed here. Someone has to stitch Patchwork back together. Charon and the boys from Lincoln's Hope returned a few days ago, punishing the rat's nest of slavers that had appeared from up north. You're well enough to travel, and with Charon you'll be safe enough."

"So, where do I find this Charon?"

"You'll know him when you see him. Try asking Tulip, at the Rose of Charon - to your right, as you leave The Chop Shop." Barrows turned a desk, picking up a handful of holotapes and papers. "Take these to the Brotherhood and tell them everything. They may be bigot bastards, but their scribes know their science. Now go, find Charon. Consider it the doctor's fee."

Marie didn't need to ask around. As she stepped into the main, stinking foyer of Underworld she heard footsteps. Clunking, metallic footsteps making their way down a set of stairs to her right. An armoured clad giant made his way through the foyer, a shogun attached to his back, a thin black strip on his mask obscuring his eyes, his shoulder armour seemingly as large as Marie herself. She cautiously approached the armoured giant, unsure of what to say to him.

"Excuse me," she waved awkwardly, completely ignored by the giant. "Are you Charon?"
He turned his armoured head for a second, assessing Marie's presence and dismissing it instantly.

"I need to talk to you," she shouted after him.

"I don't care," came a distorted and gravelly voice with a strange accent. "Talk to Tulip."

"Doctor Barrows told me to find you," Marie yelled, hoping that some name dropping would buy her some time.

"Very well," he said, stopping in his tracks and slowly turning to her. "Speak."

"I need to go to The Citadel and find the Lone Wanderer, to pass Doc Barrow's research along to the Brotherhood of Steel."

"Hmph. Getting to The Citadel is simple. We shall find my former employer."

"Former employer?"

"Yes."

"You mean The Lone Wanderer?"

"Yes."

"You don't talk much, do you?"

"No."

Marie followed her terse companion out of the curious city, to be greeted by the obelisk she had glimpsed before her rescue. Charon waved her forward impatiently. With research papers and holotapes stuffed neatly into her scorched longcoat's pockets, a slaver shotgun that had seen better days and renewed hope in her quest for answers, she set forth to The Citadel.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:07 pm

"Macready Tower". :evil: He probably would be nearly as dangerous as the LW when he grew up and had to leave for Big Town.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:41 am

This update gives more questions than it anwers questions...

Now I'm excited for the next.

Good job!
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:21 pm

Holy hell!


How have I not posted on this before?! I've been reading it since the very beginning... but I wanted to make sure that I finally said just how amazingly awesome I think your work is. Furthermore, I would like to mention that any 'inconsistencies' you might experience between the world of your story here... and the world of reality... can easily be explained by the fact that Fallout 3's cities and history are wildly divergent from those of reality!

So! No criticism from me! Just adoring praise.

That... and the request for more info about MacCready Tower!
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 2:00 pm

how did i miss that?
anyway, that was awesome!
cant wait to see "QOTP" charron in action!
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 1:53 pm

Lorca I have some big news to tell you!!!!!!!!!

I've just checked, and this story is only 30 views away from being the most popular thread in the history of this forum. :ooo: (In the Fan-Fiction Section of Fallout That Is)

My Fan-Fiction is only number 8 in all time popularity. :cry:

I wish to both congratulate you and inform you that you are now my sworn enemy for all time until "The Crusader" has taken its rightful place as number one in popularity for all time! You shall feel my vengance!!!!!!!! :obliviongate:

Just kidding aout that last part :P ...........Mostly.....

Congratulations!!!!!

:celebration: :celebration: :celebration:
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 10:12 am

Blimey! Well, been too busy getting killed by Cazadors in New Vegas to put an update up for a while, but will have one up quite soon.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 9:13 pm

Very cool. I am enjoying all of the references to the characters and setting of Fallout 3.
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:48 am

Right, a break from New Vegas means an update to Marie's journey!

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Chapter 12: Hope's Citadel

Marie could barely keep pace with the immense strides of the metal-clad figure, as he made his way across the National Mall. To the east, beyond the great obelisk, stretched cultivated rows of corn set before a rectangular building. To the west, a dome covered in scaffolds dominated the skyline. As always, she was full of questions.

"You grow things here?"

"Birth of Freedom's fields," Charon replied. "We trade with them occasionally. We share a common cause."

"Birth of Freedom? What kind of a name is that?"

"They took it from the inscriptions in the monument. My former employer helped establish the settlement. Long ago, when I was in the employ of a corrupt bartender and this place was known only as the Capital Wasteland, he went there and eliminated its previous occupants, slavers from Paradise Falls. The people there now revere him as The Great Emancipator."

"Did you go with him to The Pitt? None of our histories mention you...and I think you'd be quite memorable."

"Hmph. No."

"Why not?"

"The only means of transportation precluded my presence. Not an unusual occurrence. Out of boredom more than anything, my former employer loved to travel."

"Ah, the old train tunnel. What do you know of The Pitt?"

"My former employer told me that, much like The Capital Wasteland, it was infested by degenerates. Slavers, raiders, murderers. He said that he missed my presence when he culled the unrighteous. The Regulators rewarded him handsomely for that work."

"Did he ever mention a man named Ashur?"

"Ashur? Paladin Ishmael Ashur? Yes."

"Wait - what did you call him?"

"Paladin Ishmael Ashur. During the Scourge of the Pitt, the Brotherhood of Steel considered him Missing in Action. My former employer found his fallen brother. He has now been stricken from the Great Codex."

"The Great Codex?"

"A Brotherhood record. Ask my former employer about it. Before he released me from service I was contractually obliged to aid him and his allies, but frankly I never took much notice of their nonsense. Enough questions. We're here."

Marie found herself before a great structure, reinforced by rusting steel, a crane moving girders about. Before the gate, an immense tower reminiscent of the mobile MIND device she had seen in Old Dominion, only far taller. Men armoured in a similar manner to her guide milled about, blue emblems emblazoned on their chests depicting cogs and sword intertwined.

"Charon," nodded one of the guards at the gate in a respectful tone. "Sentinel Blood is in the Lyons Den. Who is the outsider?"

"She wishes to see Sentinel Blood, and the scribes. Doctor Barrows thinks you will be very interested in some of his findings relating to her."

"Really? The scribes have their hands full at the moment, but Sentinel Blood always has time for you. Proceed. Outsider," he turned to Marie, "You enter our home. Behave yourself."

Marie nodded, heading through a cleared out passageway into a great courtyard. She followed Charon across the courtyard, down into the heart of the building.

"Who the hell is Sentinel Blood? I want to see The Lone Wanderer," she whispered. "Another one of his nicknames?"

"His Brotherhood rank and codename," scolded Charon.

"Sentinel Blood...what kind of codename is that?"

"Shortly before I left his service, during the Next Obstacle, we made a sport of hunting Super Mutants. He holds the record for the number of Super Mutant blood vials turned in. I'd avoid the subject of Super Mutants around him, though. Here."

Having made their way through endless corridors, she found herself in a circular room, tables arranged in parallel to the walls and chairs set in regular order. A single figure sat opposite the entrance, in front of a computer terminal. Marie's mind instantly went back to her friend in The Commonwealth. The same long face and nose, deep set eyes hidden behind sunglasses and long hair swept back. A deep and ugly scar wound its way across his right cheek, disfiguring his already unhandsome face. He wore a similar set of armour as Charon, although far lighter coloured and in somewhat better condition. The cog and sword motif had been emblazoned across his chest, another detail missing from Charon's suit. He looked up from the terminal, ceasing his typing.

"Charon brought you here," he coughed. "Must be someone important. My work is important, so make it quick, outsider."

Marie fixed his gaze, just visible behind his glasses. She narrowed her own eyes, gritting her teeth as she chose her words.

"I didn't think you'd recognise me," Marie spoke in a controlled monotone. "But I've come a long way to find you."

The Lone Wanderer removed his glasses, a shaky hand placing them carefully on the desk. "And who might you be?"

"My name is Marie Ashur. You killed my father. Prepare to die."

Marie grabbed the slaver's 9mm pistol from her longcoat pocket, aiming it carefully at the Wanderer's unarmoured head. In an instant, she felt a white hot spark grip her hand, sending the pistol flying worthlessly across the floor. The Wanderer pointed an absurd looking pistol at her.

"You cannot outdraw me, girl," he spat. "I have twenty years of combat experience and cybernetics that would but The Commonwealth to shame. I don't know who you are, and I don't know who your father was. If I killed him, he was probably some raider or slaver scum."

"Allow me to refresh your memory," she hissed back, reaching for the sawn-off shotgun. "The Pitt. Twenty years ago. The baby girl you kidnapped."

The Wanderer continued to fix her gaze, a look of sudden realisation coming across his face. He ran his gloved hand through his dusty hair, holstering his pistol as he sat back down.

"My God," he spoke after a long silence. "It's you. The little girl. Tiny Marie...I knew this day would come."

"You remember now?"

"Forgive me. I am too preoccupied with my work, I didn't recognise your name...or face. You're the spit of your mother...Sarah? Sandra?"

"My mother? Did you kill her too?"

"Look...I don't know what you've heard from Wehrner, but you deserve the truth."

"Wehrner's dead, or worse. I've had to piece together my past myself. I know you killed my father."

"You don't, because I didn't. Trogs killed your father, as he was about to kill me. Haven. After the lights went out, the Trogs wiped out the ruling slaver class. Saved me a lot of bullets and the slaves a lot of blood. Your mother...I had no choice. I'm sorry. White labcoat and a .44 Magnum, the fury of a mother who has had a baby stolen. She would have hit you, and I could not have allowed that."

"Why did you kidnap me? Why not leave me with my parents?"

"I didn't know, at first. Wehrner told me of a cure for the sickness that plagued The Pitt. I didn't know it would be a baby. Later he said I would have whined about it, and he was a man who wanted action immediately. Living in that place, I didn't blame him."

"You didn't answer my question."

"I had to make a choice," shouted the Lone Wanderer, slamming his palms on the desk. "People were dying in the streets to give me the opportunity, and I couldn't let them die in vain. Your father and his goon squad rushed outside to deal with the slave uprising, leaving me with a few raiders, your mother, and you. I had to choose a side there and then."

"And you chose Wehrner?"

"I chose the people of The Pitt, not just the ruling elite. Your father may have come up with a cure. But it would have been used for his ilk, and to control the slave population. Do you seriously think that a man who had built his small empire on the backs of slaves, who fashioned himself Lord of The Pitt would give all that up? Never."

"How do you know that?"

"I've seen his kind before. Results at all costs. Any cost, including our humanity. We can't sacrifice that, Marie. In a world like this, it's all we have left. He wasn't doing evil for evil's sake like his underlings, but evil must be punished. The strong must stand up for the weak."

"Sounds like you. Doing evil for a greater good, kidnapping children and murdering in the name of humanity? Are you so different from my father, building on the backs of slaves in the name of progress?"

"Don't you dare compare us. We both served the Brotherhood, but our similarities end there. Your father saw weakness and sensed an opportunity for himself. I saw weakness and stood up for them. You know nothing of me, of my accomplishments. While you lived in a free city, thanks to my actions alone, I was fighting for the people of this wasteland, because nobody else could. Because nobody else was strong enough."

"Another parallel to my father. You do what you do simply because you are the strongest, because nobody else can resist you. Thanks to you, I never knew my parents. Thanks to your strength."

"Enough of this. I knew your father, and am nothing like him. I am sorry about your mother, truly I am. I never knew my mother either, and know the pain of growing up without a father. But I will not apologise for doing the right thing, however distasteful. I cannot allow you to interrupt my work. If you try to kill me, you're impeding the progress of The District, and I cannot allow that. Make your choice. Live, your petty vengeance unfulfilled, or die content that you at least attempted it."

Marie dropped her shotgun with a pvssyr on the floor, collapsing into a seat.
"I...don't know what to do. My parents, unrepentant slavers to the end. Their murderer, too strong to bring to justice. And me, caught in the middle of it all."

"I have something for you," The Wanderer said, pressing buttons on his wrist device. I took away your father and mother, but before I left The Pitt I acquired some holotapes from your father, meant for you. I kept them, if you were ever to track me down."

A clear and determined voice emanated from the device. The Wanderer played four recordings in succession, from the Lord of The Pitt to his daughter. He told her how he came to The Pitt with the Brotherhood, how he nearly died, how he became a god-king and how he rebuilt The Pitt using slaves, and the cure inside her.

"...by the time you're old enough to hear this, you'll already be a hero," ended the tape. "Congratulations, Marie. You've already saved us all. I knew you would."

A long silence followed. Marie broke it.
"He was right. The Pitt has been saved, but not the way he would have imagined it."

"That's why I did what I did, Marie. We were after the same thing, but I tried to serve the greater good."

"Judging by his words, so was he."

"Indeed. But I cannot forgive slavery. It is an evil that should be annihilated, as it represents regression into barbarism, not progression."

"Even after hearing that...I have to admit I couldn't agree with him. Picturing Midea, Nola and the others as slaves...I don't think I could take that."

"I knew I couldn't. I don't expect you to forgive me for what happened to your parents, but at least hoped you'd understand, especially after hearing your father's words. We lost contact with The Pitt when the tunnel collapsed. What is it like today?"

"People work, hard, to make better lives for themselves. But we are free, and most of us are healthy."

"And your cure?"

"Worked. Well, worked for women."

"Hmm. Didn't see that coming. At least it's better than it was. Just like The District, which used to be ravaged by slavers and raiders. We're still beset by Super Mutants, from here and those ignorants in Old Dominion..."

"I've been to Old Dominion," replied Marie. "They don't like you much either."

"Really? You might have seen the Mark III, we sent him down there to recover a MIND unit. They're playing with fire."

"Howso? You wiped out a Vault and your Brothers take what they can find from the locals."

"For the greater good. To stop mutant attacks on innocent people. But the selfish people of 75 didn't see that, erased their computer. We got most of what we wanted, though."

"I knew the engineer from that Vault. He says that you wiped out the Vault population?"

"He said what? No, no. They dispersed into the wastes, merging with other settlements. A lot found themselves in Megaton, not far north of here. We found from databases here that MIND was just the beginning of the Vault 75 experiment. We realised we could win the war against the rampaging Super Mutants without firing another shot."

"By brainwashing them, like Old Dominion?"

"By using them. We've just started to rebuild. How useful would a mutant army be, in tilling our fields, lifting the stonework. Real progress, without any threats."

"You know this thing works on ghouls? They'd be slaves."

"Which is why we're researching how to tune it to the brainwave frequencies of Super Mutants only. That's what the thing outside is. Liberty Prime Mark III brought us the last remaining MIND unit we need. The device is the MasterMIND, a MIND unit powerful enough to control all the Super Mutants in The District and beyond. This war has cost us enough already. While you were safe in a free city, my brothers and I were fighting and dying to destroy the source of these monsters."

"The source?"

"A vault. We waded in there with our power armour and gatling lasers, evacuating nearby settlements as we went. The mutants fought ferociously. We lost a lot of good people destroying that evil place. A lot of good people. Poor Sarah...But, it made the Brotherhood ultimately stronger. Under Elder Maxson's guidance, we were reunified once again. But, as you've seen, it isn't enough."

"If you destroyed the source, wouldn't they die out naturally?"

"You'd think. I'm convinced they have amassed a second source of their Forced Evolutionary Virus somewhere. But after the bloodbath in Vault 87 Elder Maxson is unwilling to devote further Brotherhood resources to find it. Instead, we invested in MasterMIND."

"And what of Zen?"

"Ah, the pet project of Fawkes and Leo. To be blunt, we don't know. There's no way to predict if the self-styled Meta Humans will be affected. But it's a risk we should be willing to take. What is the fate of one town, compared to that of the entire wasteland?"

"I think there is another way. You know Doctor Barrows?"

"The ghoul doctor? Always chasing his pipe dream, but a good man."

"With me, and your MasterMIND...we could cure this wasteland."

Marie handed him Barrow's research notes, along with the last remaining vial of the cure. The Wanderer studied them for what seemed like an eternity, while Marie looked on.

"This must get to the scribes immediately. If you've given up on killing me, get some food and rest in the B-ring."

An eventful day had taken its toll on Marie, and she willingly followed the Sentinel's orders. Hours turned into days, but the Paladins and Knights were respectful, and she had plenty of food and water, as well as access to the Citadel archives. Reading about the Scourge of The Pitt deep into the night, she drifted into sleep, and a dream of her home as it had been. When she awoke a blue-robed figure was standing over her, red robed figures at his flank.

"F-forgive me for waking you," he stuttered, adjusting a thick pair of glasses. "I am Elder Maxson, head of the D.C. detachment of the Brotherhood. My scribes, Sentinel Blood and myself have spent the week anolysing the research you brought us. Lyons Doctrine dictates we aid the wasteland in our quest for technology, and this research enables us to do both. Paladin Casdin has said that MasterMIND is nearly ready, but using this research...there's another way. Decades ago, before we fought another great war with a group the Enclave, the man who would become Sentinel Blood gave us a modified version of the Forced Evolutionary Virus, the virus which causes Super Mutants. Only this strain proved fatal to any living thing with a mutation. We stored in the Citadel's vault, studying it intensely. There was no way to further modify it. But, with Barrow's research, the Enclave's FEV, MasterMIND and your unique genetic code...you can redeem your father's name in the Great Codex."

Marie blinked at the gangly figure, with thinning hair. He seemed far too young to be called 'Elder' of anything.

"But there's a problem. The Codex forbids us from demanding the same sacrifices from outsides that we can expect from our brothers in steel."

"Sacrifices?"

"The vial you gave us was useful in determining the applicability of your cure and how we can integrate it successfully with the modified FEV. But we will need more in order to make its application practical and combat the initial FEV infection in Super Mutants."

"It'll hurt," said the Wanderer as he walked in the room. "Or worse. You may not survive the process."

"Taking more of the cure may kill me?"

"Yes," Maxson nodded. "The Sentinel will preside over the operation. But the rewards. We will use MasterMIND to call docile Super Mutants into one area, then distribute the modified FEV among them using Project Purity, our mass water purifier. Ordinarily, the modified FEV would kill them. With your cure integrated into the virus, it will reassert the initial genetic code of the Super Mutant."

"In short," added the Wanderer, "The waters of life will restore humanity to mutant and ghoul alike. They will be who they were before they were taken, before their humanity was stolen from them. We've contacted the District Congress. Megaton and Rivet City have pledged that these... rehabilitants will be protected as any human, under District law."

"Won't the water harm ordinary humans?"

"Other than removing mutations, no," explained the Wanderer. "I doubt the people of the District will miss their extra toes and brain tumours. But, as our Elder has said, the choice is yours."

"I have been told from birth that my purpose is to cure people," Marie whispered to herself. "I'll do it."

"Excellent," replied the Wanderer. "We'll prep you for surgery immediately. If you should die in the service of the wasteland, know that at the end of your long road, you have embraced the greatest virtue. Sacrifice. My father died for the good of the people, and should you follow in his footsteps and sacrifice life itself for the greater good of mankind...you will be remembered not only as the Hero of The Pitt, but as The Saviour of The District."
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