http://yourlisten.com/channel/content/58725/fallout%203%20rap
please leave any criticism.
just my way of saying thank you for such a kick ass game.

Class [censored] man, nice one!

Make one of NV if it's good!

You have to acquire a flow, because this is is just you talking and making every last word rhyme. This is my cultural cornerstone, and I know people who do this for a living. In addition I'm sorry, but the beat isn't that good.

Good verses, but no flow, too slow, and bad beat. Either way it was...different and nice.

Takes me back to the 80s when hop-hop was just emerging. I agree with Ant1v3 though, flow is all important.

reworking the vocals. thinking about making a video.

Gladthat you listened to me, because I know a couple people who can't take constructive csritism

criticism is always appreciated. the cornerstone of your culture comment threw me off tho. ive been into rap and video games for over twenty years now. this is the 4th song ive made now. the first one done entirely by myself. with some work and a video i think i have a chance at a date with olivia munn tho. and then my master plan shall be accomplished.

cornerstone of my culture only means everyone i kno raps, and they always bring up how we made rap and all that good stuff.

I think Eminem is the best rapper though, he's not afraid to rap about anything.