I enjoyed it thoroughly. Looking forward to seeing Egil develop.

To help save the timeline I moved my post date back a day so it looks like I'm covering the events prior to what Mhund is doing. I admit I should of just filled in my old post with my new one but it totally slipped my mind until I had already posted. So I apologize for that hopefully we can move past this without any issue.

I think it works. The only thing that comes to mind is maybe Mhund's post and your post should swap places, but it's nothing catastrophic.

I love love love both of the posts, and I think they work wonderfully together. The violence is palpable, which I also love. Mhund, the part where Egil shouts "Talos!" and sticks out his tongue is hilarious and amazing, I have this perfect image in my head. I think that Egil and Sigourney are going to be quite the deadly pair.

Do let me know if you think it would work better to swap the two posts around. If so, I'll just have you copy them, and we can take them down and repost it.

In any case, thank you both for setting the Suran scene ahead of time. Let me know if you need any more information about the area. I am "very much excite" for the party to meet up with you savage killers.

EDIT: Oh, and I just wanted to add - Prizrak, your formatting is lovely. Very appealing to the eye.

Feel free yo delete mine and I'll repost. I jumped the gun in posting haha. Glad You enjoyed it!

Sure thing. Make sure you have it copied. I'll make a back-up of it just in case.

Reposted now, so feel free to delete original. I'm going to leave it for others to post before continuing.

Ahh, that does flow much nicer now.

I'm hoping Kaivel and Kajrue get a post up soon, but in any case it's pretty safe to expect a post from me in a few hours once I'm off work. "Talos!"

Sorry for the double post, just wanted to say whoops! Looks like the mods deleted both of your posts Mhund. o.O

Guess you'll have to put it back up! Let me know if you need that copy I made.

Two mods working at the same time, I can put it back if you want.

Haha, that would be excellent! And it's quite alright, I know how it goes (used to be a mod for another website). Thanks Rohugh.

EDIT: To clarify, the one after Prizrak's post is the one that needs to be restored. Don't want the wrong one put back.

Ro.: I think that's right now.

POST IN PROGRESS!

Edit: My post is live!

I'll get one up either after you, or tomorrow.

I'll get a post up tomorrow. It's my day off.

Ah, egg-salad. By which I mean eggs-elent. By which I mean, maybe you can break us into breakfast! Get ahold of me tomorrow, yeah?

EDIT: To clarify on the picture in my last post, the "crab-thing" that can be seen in the distance isn't a structure, that was just the best reference picture I could find. It's a living being.

I have an independant post in the works and it should be up within the confines of an hour or two if all goes well at home. In the event that I'm delayed it should at least be up by the days end.

Cool! Glad to see you have an idea in the works!

On a completely unrelated note, I would just like to really encourage people to review their pieces before posting to avoid grammatical errors and typos. It doesn't have to be perfect at all, just give it a look over and make sure to eliminate the obvious errors that stick out to you.

The key focus is of course, and always will be fun, just make sure your posts can be easily understood by everyone. If you can, run your post through a writing program like MS Word or equivalent to weed things out, or just use your best judgement.

As always, critiquing is another good option to iron out kinks, and I'm always willing to review a post at your request. I would encourage others to do the same.

Thanks!

Boom! Time to start showing off Larry's super awesome ability to know everything but be completely incapable of doing anything about it!

Sorry I've not posted for a few days, I've got a lot of uni work on at the moment. If i get time later on today I'll get a post up.

Simply amazing. I love Larry Wall! You did a great job of unveiling the mystery of the entity, now on to the mystery of why it's around.

You're fine josephb, no apologies necessary. Post when you can.

For the moment elissandre isn't too worried about the 'what's that critter doing here' : it's still a very long way from the Sepren't Wake, and looks big enough that even a ship wouldn't make a meal worth spending much effort to catch.

Great posts all I could hear when I was reading about the titan crabs was the Jurassic Park theme song.

HA! That just made my day.

EDIT: I've been having a lot of trouble with the forums logging my account out right when I try to post. This only happens with long posts, and I assume it has something to do with "timing out." I just wanted to give another quick reminder to BACK YOUR WORK UP BEFORE POSTING. I can't stress this enough, because the frustration of losing a lot of work is... well, sometimes heart-breaking.

So yeah. Don't be like me. Back your work up.

Working on a post.

This OOC is getting spammy and too chatty. Please observe the rules for this forum as pinned at the top.

I have been known for disallowing OOC topics for this reason!

My mistake Rohugh.

I will work on reinforcing the rules more avidly.

EDIT: I added an important update to the RP rules regarding this. Let it remind us of what not to do.

And I will be revising the RP rules a bit to better accommodate the forum rules shortly.