due to the overwhelming amount of S**Tmail ive received on the post, ive decided to delete it.

I haven't read it, but you've got lotsa problems. Grammar I mean. Hold old are you? If you don't mind me asking...

Dude, make shorter sentences.

I didn't really read the whole thing yet, so I'll post more.

My guess would be your average 11 year old.

I don't wish to hurt his feelings, but before I say anything it's important that know how old he is, as well as his level of education/writing skill.

and i would guess, its called make up stuff as you go? idk if you all have mental issues, but if some people arent freaking steven king in thier english/grammar skills, noone has a right to take a dump on thier work, even if it took me like 5 minutes to write it. if you think you can do better, go try

...I was going to try and help you, but whatever........