This is my first Fan-fic, so who knows what will happen

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Prologue: A morning in Colorado, 2250

Rangle Clicked on his Radio. Just Static. In Colorado, there was almost nothing ever on the radio, and even if something came threw it was just some broadcasts from Denver. Rangle turned the radio off and started to put on his Regulator Duster. His was covered with so much dirt and blood, that no part of the original Duster was visible. After pulling on his boots - Which were layered with dirt - he looked at everyone else, so peaceful, dreaming, no worries in the world until they woke up and then he shot his .32 caliber into the air, waking up all of them.

"What the- oh, it's just you." George said and after taking a deep breathe he told Rangle in a cold voice, " Don't do that, it's a waste of ammo and you scared all of us to death." He walked off, acting as though he didn't freak out from the gunshot.

"Why'd you wake us up?" Alec asked.

" 'cuz today were heading for Denver." Rangle reminded him.

"Well isn't that just dandy!" Cyrus yelled and stormed outside, probably to have a smoke

"Rangle, we all thought you were joking," Karissa said, yawning. "Going there is suicide."

"Why do you think the Regulators sent us out here, to just stay in this shack for the rest of our life's?" Rangle started to raise his voice, " We are going to Denver!"

"Fine, we'll go but I'm just saying that were all gonna die!"

"And I'm just saying were gonna die staying here!"

"Calm down you two," It was the voice of reason, Shannon. "Karissa, he's right where gonna die out here without more supplies. I suggest we leave as soon as everybody's ready."

"Your right Shannon, but I just thinks it's a bad idea." Karissa said in a Know-It-All tone before leaving to get ready.

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I'll go into more detail into where there at in the next chapter.
So what do you guys think? Any and all feedback would be appreciated. Thanks

Cool. Good Idea. Awesome diversity of chars. I couldn't even pinpoint the redshirts.
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This was like those little samples they give out in grocery stores. One bite and you are off to the frozen food aisle...fighting over the last bag of it with some old lady. As she draws her pepper spray you notice a stocker wheeling a shopping cart full of the stuff and you graciously let her keep hers. Then she sprays your eyes...

For a first fanfic this is good. Looking forward to more

thanks, I've been wanting to actually write a story for a while, I'll write the next part of the story tomorrow morning or sooner. I found a page on Denver in the Vault Wiki here's the link. http://fallout.wikia.com/wiki/Denver
It's where some of the story will take place

Dogs eh? Have fun with that. I just watched a NCIS episode with Navy Dogs, Drugs and (of course) Murder.
Sounds like it will be a lot of creature combat (Mutant Bats? Those could be fun...). Hey maybe your guys could be/are the mysterious military group that is there with the two rival scavenger gangs...
I can't wait to read your continued adventures in Denver Colorado...

Some of it also takes palce in the boulder dome, also in colorado. Wiki page here, http://fallout.wikia.com/wiki/Boulder_Dome

Ok, so I when I was gonna start this I got sick and forgot about this, but I remembered this and I'm about to start this again.

Chapter 1:Preparation

Rangle looked over everyone. None of them looked prepared and all of them looked annoyed and tired. Rangle frowned and shook his head.

Cyrus was the angriest, "Rangle why are we leaving so early? I mean it's not even 5:00 AM."

Rangle Frowned again, "Denver is over 2 days away. If we're heading there, then we got to go early."

Cyrus grumbled and lit up another cigarette, even though the one he'd been smoking was still fresh.

Rangle took a heavy sigh and told his comrades, in a sharp, loud voice, "Everybody, this not Pre-War, this is the Wasteland, where everything is eating you or trying to eat you. When I want you guys to get ready, then get the [CENSORED] ready! Now we're heading for Denver in 5 Minutes, so get anything you missed so we can leave."

After Rangle's speech, everybody woke up and started packing up and they headed out for Denver.

Rangle clapped after a while, "Now that's Regulators do it! Haha!"
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Not a long paragraph, but they'll be plenty longer later and is it better than the first? probably not, because it was mainly Rangle talking.