repeating history (RP signup)

Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:16 am

New Vegas, along time ago this place was just a pile of sand, backhanders, swindlers, and gangsters made this town from nothing... there are allot of bodies burried out in that dessert. Currently these California republic Dbags are trying to take over the join, as if this was there state to begin with! The only allegence this town has is to money...period, always has been always will. Currently the crime commiting bottom feeders have been tired of Mr.Houses monopoly, they want him out of the picture... not as much as the California republic... but still his greed is getting too much for even the greediest place on the map. The super mutants... slavers, raiders, salvation... it all comes second in this town. Currently this Kadin Li fellow has moved from out est, brought quiet bit of muscle with him. More and more backhanders, even those in Mr.Houses pocket have raised an eyebrown to this Asian crime boss, who has his eye's set on the Vault casino, along with many other realestate properties under his control, the question is, who is going to be left standing when this fued is resolved.



OOC: Rules, first, when you type out of character, you put OOC, before it, second, your not god, dont controll other ppls chracters (or Kadin Li). Make your person another face win the crowd, we need shady water merchants, pick pockets, A-hole bouncers, upcoming wanna be wiseguys, and LIMITED hit men 2 max. Your working either WITH or for Mr.House or up coming Korean crime boss, Kadin Li. The California republic is frowned down uppon with the gangsters, so anyway u can harm them is encouraged (hit contracts, muggins, jumping groups of them outside bars.. but dont just cruise around popping them in the head... give it some story, remember securitrons investigate everything. So i you pop someone, head to hiding) Here's an exmple of character creation:

Name: Otis
Age: 28
Job: Upcoming made man
Race: Hispanic
Weapons: Sub-machine gun, shotgun, lead pipe, brass knuckles (usually used in back rooms to get answers out of guys)
Appearence: Thin mustache, shaved head, leather jacket when doing dirty work, Suit when in the casino
Bio: Came out from down south a couple years ago, made name for himself quick. His first night in town a guy was tlking smack to him, he let him walk out of the bar. However the next morning that same guy was found with his legs cut off at the knee's, hanging from a light post. If he has a weakness it would probably be his controlled usage of Jet, either that or the broad's, it's not well known wheather or not he has any children...or whether it was him who killed that guy the first night. Currently he pulls low level favors for Mr.House, and is usually found at the Tops casino.
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:41 am

I'm sorry, but your going to a need a lot more that if you want to make a RP. People need direction, this gives you none. We have almost no idea what this even about. We have no idea what where doing or what where going to be doing. It's lacking a lot of vital detail and is going to require some work. You should go browse some other RP sign ups; Lost Contact, Fire in the Sky, Warren, Quarantine. It would give you a good visual on what a sign up is suppose to look like.
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Marlo Stanfield
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 4:03 am

take care of, I've done this before, I'm pretty good at running RP's. Wanna join?
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daniel royle
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:11 am

I'm sorry, but your going to a need a lot more that if you want to make a RP. People need direction, this gives you none. We have almost no idea what this even about. We have no idea what where doing or what where going to be doing. It's lacking a lot of vital detail and is going to require some work. You should go browse some other RP sign ups; Lost Contact, Fire in the Sky, Warren, Quarantine. It would give you a good visual on what a sign up is suppose to look like.


Oh Yttrrium, you never change. When I read the reply, I was like 'This sounds familiar...' Then I looked. Classic

I was thinking the same thing though.
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Erika Ellsworth
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:58 am

For my little input, you might want to follow something like this template


Story/Backstory: 2-4 Paragraphs to really give it something, and people can be excited, etc.
{












}
Rules: Usually something like a paragraph doesn't work, and hasn't worked in the past. Might be best to go into a

1.
2.
3.
4.

etc. way rather a paragraph. People like that better, and they don't get mixed up with rules that they might (and most likely) will break if it's not clear enough.

Then for Character Sheets, it's best to just have template, then follow up with your own character. Then people don't have to copy your character, clear everything from the template, and make their own. Something like this.


Name
Age
Race
Gender

Hair Color
Hair Length

Weight
Height

Eye Color
Skin Color

Weapons

Clothes/Armor

Gear

Personality

Bio

Then follow with your own CS.

Name: John Doe
Age: 32
Race: Caucasian
Gender: Male

Hair Color: Black
Hair Length: Short

Weight: 175lbs
Height: 5'6

Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: Mild Tan

Weapons: Big Gun, Little Gun, Knife, Grenades

Clothes/Armor: Leather Armor, Wasteland Wanderer Clothes (Or whatever you wish from the real world too.)

Gear: Ammo, Food, Water, Survival Map

Personality: Tough yet nice. John Doe is a good man to have when the going gets tough. He can chat his way through a fight, but if wants to can just throw fits.

Bio: John Doe was born in such and such, had his tenth birthday but on the next day his mother died and father was shot dead by raiders. He doesn't like raiders, he kills raiders for a living pretty much, but has been known to live with them. But for some reason, they're all dead when he leaves.


Something like that will help your RP out a lot, and give it something more than a flimsy little story. Detail and depth is key to any RP you make.
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Laura
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:46 pm

yeah I kinda rushed it, I used to ly down a HEAVY RP back in the day when I used to post here, just not as much of nerd as I once was....
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Tom
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 3:49 am

And please PLEASE dont use shortened words like, u or ppl. Its an eye sore
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Kelly James
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:13 pm

Please give your OP a spell check.
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meghan lock
 
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:11 pm

New Vegas; a long time ago this place was just more desert. Backhanders, swindlers, and gangsters made this town into something long before the war wiped civilization out. There are a lot of bodies buried in this desert.

These days those NCR [censored]s have largely taken over. Ultimately though, the only allegiance this town has is to money. Always been that way and it always will be. Up and coming crime figures these days are caught between a rock and a hard place. They have the iron fisted rule of the NCR on one side, and House and his army of bots on the other. The situation is a pressure boiler and something has got to give.

Kadin Li has moved in, with a good bit of muscle to back him up, to carve out his share. He's got his eyes fixed on New Vegas, and his name is being mentioned more and more throughout the town. All that remains to be seen is who will be left standing when the dust (sand I suppose) settles. It's gonna be a good old fashioned gang war. And gang wars, gang wars never change.

1. No God Characters
2. No Character Controlling
3. Limit Out of Character (OCC) Statements
4. This town has an economy, not everyone is going to be a wandering badass/mercenary/assassin/ex-raider/etc.
5. You may join either House or Kadin Li
6. In establishing your character, any action against the NCR is encouraged
7. Don't just walk around killing three armed NCR guards and walking away; Securitrons investigate everything so you will need to go into hiding.



Something like that only you should include a bit more background. It's fun to leave everything up to the player but you haven't told enough about the factions for anyone to care. What's Kandi's deal. Is he Yakuza or something, is he from San Fran, is he just starting out or a big force invading. Is he discreet and trying to move in slowly or waging all out war?

What about House's men? Are they so dominant in the area that the NCR is in their pocket? It has a good idea and potential, but even well thought out RPs have a tendency to die here.
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Post » Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:27 pm

Name: Brent Tao
Age: 26
Job: Yakuza/Free Agent
Race: Japanese/Caucasian
Weapons: Wakizashi, Throwing Knives
Appearence: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=one+armed+soldier#/djnvt1

Bio: The child of a simple trader and the daughter of a Yakuza Boss. His father was murdered by his mother's father who was outraged by their eloping without his blessing. Raised as a despised bastard child within the gang, his mother was the only source of kindness in his life. At the age of 17 he was determined to leave the gang after the death of his mother. Before he was let go, the gang held him down and cut his entire left arm off as his requirement to leave. Nine years later he has come to New Vegas to join this growing new power. He is accompanied by http://api.ning.com/files/Izh1Zf8r5qYs4yboJu8QUosA9xk3c4uJv5TkfqhM2jEgVDXS8tL*SvCWvHvbpn1rSggf9p4*RzkDayxhrKW5gC0u5iM*9hmF/Wastelander_Girl_by_AkaiSoul.png.jpg the former caravan guard and Takwa the contemplative tribal.

The most accurate way to describe him is that he is a lesser evil wherever he goes. Loyal and supportive to his friends, merciless and sadistic towards his enemies. A firm believer in choice, he has no shame in selling Jet to children, but will not tolerate a slaver forcibly enslaving a man who owes him no money.
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