*dies of laughter* Its utterly hilarious! Your a good writer with this

Roflmao. "Can we hurry up, cause I gotta leak." was my favorite part.

Think you can hand down some tips for making funny things like this? I have the idea for a funny fanfic, but after reading this, I am going, "Nahh, THIS is hilarious."

You can't simply force humor. Either you have it or you don't.

that was hilarious,i enjoyed the entire story.

Hahaha! I had a good couple of giggles from reading this, very very funny.