I found the review comprehensive, albeit biased towards complaint over measured illumination of the factors at play in the game.
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I'm in the same boat as RedScream.
I've clocked in just over 100 hours into Skyrim and I feel this 'review' is more like a scrutiny of its flaws; a narrowing of the scope on a positive only to couple it with derogatory words like however. You make some valid points (many of which I agree with) and your prose technique is spot on, but still, it's all a little too negative for me. Skyrim deserves a lot more credit than you're giving it.
Maybe you can add in more things you enjoy? And if so, deliver the same amount of detail and depth as you did in expressing your disappointment? Cause to be honest, I feel like after reading it, you're unconsciously telling me to stay the [censored] away from this game. Haha. Your vocabulary is rich and passionate when you're expressing dissatisfaction, but whenever I come across something positive it lasts a good sentence until it finds another variant of however. From an objective standpoint, this is bad as I feel your opinions are outshining your statements.
tl;dr I agree with most things you say, but I wish you didn't present Skyrim so lowly.
It's a wonderful little gem, even if it is a bit scratched.