» Thu May 26, 2011 9:21 pm
Hey, Midgetalien
Per your request, I've tried to create an .esp with some suggested changes, but Windows Vista (apparently) has its own ideas (not an uncommon issue, I'm afraid) and I am unable to comply with your request in toto.
Nevertheless, here are some thoughts, after plowing through v.1.7 of your Riller-Mosh .esp (to check for what the original author had in mind, since any new stuff has asterisks (*) in the CS) and v.2.2 of your latest .esm:
1. Recommended new "Slather-Mar Clan" ranks (top to bottom):
10 The Rattler-Sithyorn [_RillerRattlerSithyorn] -- currently a "noble" in the faction, but surely at the top (c.f. U.K. Queen Elizabeth??)
Kas-Sithyorn [_RillerKasMayor] -- ?? Consort to Rattler (c.f. U.K. Prince Philip??) or Prime Minister/Mayor/Senior Non-Temple Official??
Depending on how you want to deal with him (he did author a warning about the kelp mines, after all), either consider this an "honorific" rank (recommended), or make 9th.
9(8) Nar-Fajeem [_RillerWarChief] -- currently "Warrior Lvl 89" (c.f. U.K. Prime Minister??, or Minister of Defense, depending on above)
8 Vortra-Ta (Hist) [_RillerTListener] -- currently "Priest Lvl 50," and there is only 1 (temple)
7 Vortra-Bo (Hist) [_RillerWhisperer01, 02] -- currently "Priest Lvl 15"
6 Nar-Memmjum [_RillerSpeaker] -- currently "Knight Lvl 40," and there is only 1 (Waj-Dar, secular). Could be an "honorific" title, not a rank per se (recommended).
5 (6) Vortra-Haserin [_RillerTTruthteller01, 02, 03] -- currently "Priest Lvl 7 - 10," but could be both a temple and a secular rank. Famous authors might get this rank.
4 (5) Nar-Trett [Fulfiller -- misspelled "Forfiller01, 02" (Neemu, Klarthander) in NPC I.D.s] Klarthander should probably be a "Truthteller"(Vortra-Haserin), since he has published some books/guides.
3 (4) Vortra-Gorian [_RillerTSeeker01, 02] -- currently "Pilgtim Lvl 5" (temple)
2 (3) Mema-Nar [your basic Watcher/Guard, various levels]
1 (2) Saurian [any Noble, or Supervisor of others (e.g., Mine Supervisor, etc.) should at least have this rank] Currently, NPCs classed as "Noble" with current rank "Commoner" include: AmbassadorDesk01, AmbassadorDesk02, CensusReceiver, CensusTaker.
(1) Vissedian ["commoner" types -- basic Slather-Mar clan members]
Me, I kinda think the PC should NOT be allowed to join the Slather-Mar faction, even if he/she is Argonian, since they were not born and raised on the island. So, the rank requirements for the faction are sort of irrelevant.
(And, for future quests, the PC can simply be given something like 50k gp in appreciation for "services to the clan," and be done with it).
2. Please feel free to edit, delete, forget, or ignore any of the above (or below), depending on how you want your mod to develop. I'm just tryin' to help out in a small way.
3. If you DO adopt some or all of these comments, be aware also that some other changes may be needed for consistency:
a) The Rattler-Sithyorn (9th generation) -- Her dialogue states her real name is "Slardees," but the book "_RillerHistory" says her name is "Gari-Sithyorn."
B) Her "background" topic gives standard, "I advise the Ashlander clans..." response -- easy to fix to make unique for her.
c) There is another "wise woman" [_RillerLadassa] in a15 Crater's Bed, who should probably be given a different profession/faction rank.
d) There is no "author" for the book, "_RillerShwellinMysts" -- Perhaps Klarthander ???
e) Book "_RillerWarriorRanks" misspells "Nar-Na-Hist" [as "Narn-Na-Hist"].
f) Book "_ApologeticCorrection" misspells "Truth-Teller" [as "Trueteller"].
g) Book "_RillerPlansForExpansion" misspells "Fulfiller" [as "Forfiller"].
4. I don't see the need for a separate "_RillerCrabbingFaction", as there seems to be only one member (Vvlares), and only a couple of ranks. Why not just make the NPC a normal member of the Slather-Mar faction? Just asking.
5. Again (and just for the sake of consistency) it appears that the original author intended the suffixes "Nar-" to designate secular/warrior titles, and "Vortra-" for temple/religious/spiritual titles.
Might want to consider changing "Mema-Nar" to "Nar-Mema" (and changing all the other corresponding references to "Watchers" in books, dialogue, etc.). Probably more work than is worth it, however.
Sorry, again, for my miserable inability to provide a patch .esp with all this stuff already done, but, such is life.
Best wishes, and keep up the good work!
DARoot