Okay, so the idea is that you're a merc(I'm thinking Talons) and they notice the ferry at the south of the wasteland that taks people to Point Lookout. So, they go to it and go to Point Lookout. There, they discover all the bad things like swampfolk, and they can't get back to the wasteland because the boat broke down. So they explore the swamps and get captured by swampfolk and get put in the pens underneath the Trapper's Shack, have to escape, and many other things. Maybe even a swampfolk attack on the Calvert mansion? I dunno, it'll be a horror RP of some sort.
Is it a good idea? Or does it seem.. svckish?
I like the idea. It seems kind of generic, but it's still fun. I'm not sure they should be Talon, because that's evil by default. Just make them mercenaries, neutral mercenaries, so we can keep the ordinance and not have our personalities predetermined.
Go for it. Start a thread with a character sheet, and see what people think.
Also, it's linear, so you might want to consider placing it somewhere similar to Point Lookout - say the Everglades or Mississippi, and add two different factions. But it's your RP.